Luke flew threw the trees looking behind him. 1
“Damn it!” he said, watching as the shadows crept on behind him.2
His fifteen foot wingspan made it difficult to glide gracefully threw the trees, so instead he was getting all bung and scratched up. As he looked for an exit, he spotted an abandon house, with an open window.3
“Might as well attempt it!” he mumbled to himself. 4
Luke carefully guided himself through the rain, and tree branches, heading for the window. 5
“I have to pull back on my entrance,” he mumbled. “Now!” he, shouted to himself. 6
He curled in his wings, and basically lunged his ten year-old body straight through the opening. He quickly picked himself up, and locked the window shut. He breathed heavily to himself. 7
“Those damn things!” he said, his hand on his face.8
As Luke looked around, he saw cobwebs, pictures, and an unmade bed. 9
“What the?” he asked himself, walking over to it.10
He examined it for a while, and then turned back around to see a little girl looking up at him. She looked up at him, her head cocked to the side. 11
“What are you?” she asked looking at Luke’s wings.12
“Um…” stumbled Luke. 13
“Are you a fallen angel?” she asked.14
“Well…” he started. 15
As Luke thought of an excuse, a shadow crept through the hall, and made its way over to the girl. 16
“Watch out!” shouted Luke, the shadow coming up from the floor, and lunging at the girl.17
Luke jumped in front of her and whacked the creature. It seared in pain, and slinked back into the darkness. 18
“What was that?” asked the girl. 19
“Just come with me, they know where you are now,” said Luke, picking the girl up, and flying out the window. 20
**Flashback over**21
Lia yawned, taking her head from Luke’s chest.22
“Luke wake your ass up!” she shouted. 23
“What?!” he asked, jolting up. 24
“Relax,” laughed Lia, walking into the bathroom, and washing her face.25
She stared at her fifteen year-old face in the window, and sighed. 26
“What’s up?” asked Luke, getting up.27
“It’s night aren’t we going to go?” asked Lia, walking out. 28
“Oh, yeah,” said Luke, looking towards her. “Where are you going?” he asked, “Are you leaving?”29
“If is was leaving I would have left six years ago,” laughed Lia, walking over to Luke. “Come on,” she laughed. 30
The two walked through the forest together. 31
As they were walking, something came from the trees, and grabbed at Luke’s black feathery wings. 32
“Luke!” shouted Lia. 33
“Ah!” he shouted. 34
Luke morphed his hand into black spikes, an stabbed into the creature. It cried out, and more started to pull him down. 35
“Luke, what’s happening?” asked Lia. 36
“Hell’s coming back to claim its power,” answered Luke, wriggling around. 37
“What?” asked Lia.38
“Don’t let them get you!” shouted Luke, getting pulled into the dirt.39
** Ten years later **40
Lia looked around. 41
“Die Demon!” shouted Lia, pointing her shotgun at a werewolf. 42
“AH!” it shouted. 43
Lia smiled evilly as the blood dripped down her face.44
“Ha…” she laughed, turning around, and shooting a vampire. 45
Her pupils were small, and she watched as a woman screamed.46
“My baby!” she shouted. 47
Lia quickly chased after the harpie. It soared through the air, and Lia took her bow from her back, loading it with an arrow. She tried to focus hard, when she saw the harpie look at her and smile. It looked down at the crying baby. 48
“Don’t!” she shouted.49
The beast looked down at her and smiled. It picked the baby up in its arms, cradled it, and took a bite. Lia looked at the beast horrified. Tears streamed down her face and she heard the woman cry in the background. 50
As Lia stared up at the creature laughing and flying away, something started pulling her down. She looked around and saw all the burning buildings, listening to the blood curdling screams. As she looked around, she gasped. 51
Lia was stabbed straight through the chest by a vampire’s blade. Lia looked up at it, as blood ran down the side of her mouth. 52
“Bitch,” it smiled, as she got pulled through.53
“Beast from hell!” she shouted, seeing Luke’s face looking down and laughing at her, it’s eyes blood red, and black wing’s spread across the sky. 54
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Wow! that was great! no way! this can't be the end!


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Thanks!
Thank you >.< I will write more if you'd like... lol
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