No one saw her notice his damanging results caused by disturbed darkening behavior.1
Two very close occasions she experinced his lying, disruptive actions, she knew was the cause of his present, dark 'known' secret.2
Shooting out from his eyes, she could hear him yelling at her. Screaming out to show her images of his dark, painful past he wanted ended. His unheard whispers were caught by hot tempeture rays shifting out of his body, she knew was over-heated by the strongest lethal poison cobination that was exploding in his veins & taken by the same behavior shoved back at him. (without him knowing, him seeing his mistakes showing in someone who suffered his demons years before)3
His unheard whispers were taken & locked shut only to be revealed again by severe insanity wanting to cause 'more' physical pain, then any black hole, experience felt.
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A contest entry
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Um, what? I don't get this at all. I mean I know what your saying but the grammar is so strange that I can't desifer the words in order to understand their indavidual meaning. Either way thank you for entering my contest.
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