Avatar book4 Chapter 6 part 2

Zuko came out the rocks holdding a locket it had a picture of Katara in it but at the top was some words of a promise he would make. 1

There were fire nation warriors and lighting slaves who have been thrown in the pit. Soka came out the rocks 1 minute later that is when Zuko put the locket away. The locket was golden and shiny in the shape of a squre. When he putn in his back poket one of the slaves bit his head then let go. Right there Zuko fell and screamed."AAAH! AAAH! Then the crown fell and Zuko sent into the ground. His uncle then started to Earth bend. He kicked rocks at the slaves as hard as he could. He punched on the warriors in the mouth. Then the fire nation warriors started shooting fire balls when Iroh doged them all. Then suddenly the warriors and the slaves died then standding on the mountains were Azula the princess of the fire nation and Kauko the true prince of the lighting people. "Uncle I had no idea you were a earth...EEERRRRRRRRRRR!! AAA bender"Zuko replied sickly. "Quit Zuko you have just been shocked with a posion for your brain. You body might have to shut down. " replied Iroh with worries for his nephew. Azula blasted lighting bolts at her uncle Iroh and 2

iroh picked up a boulder and then threw it redirecting the lighting at the comet then the comet took her soul. Zuko didn't get swolled because he is no longer the comets host. Kauko came down and made a strong entrance. He was just about to kill Zuko when he is punched by a unknown woman with black hair going down and getting lower and lower. She had black shoes and a sweet face. Zuko relized it is his mother. But Zuko sees she hasn't aged and that she looks diffrent. 3

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They left Ba Sing Se the next mornning with Soka and Suki. Uncle Iroh came along too with Tylee and Zuko's mom. Of course Mei came too. From Ba sing Se to the northern air temple will take them 9 hrs by war ballon. They got inside the red flame ballon. The ballon was all red with a black symbol at the top. It was a symbol of a flame. They left as they looked at the beautifil things they were seeing Zuko got worried. "What if Mei would get jeaulus since he needs Katara and what if Katara gets angry at me because she thinks I was playing her." Zuko thought. Zuko stared at Mei's beautiful face. He woluld hate to loose Mei. He sat by Mei and asked "So what are looking at?" She ansered "The warter it is fresh and clean he touched it purely. They very close to the warter to get eaten by sharks but Zuko replied "Don't worry if a shark comes I will save you. Then Zuko and Mei kissed passiontly. 5

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The last 8 hrs went by a little faster than exepected but durring those quick 8 hours Soka caught fish. But fell in the ocean and saw a sword fish then screamed. He yelled lounder than a hippo so loud that the whole ocean could here. He was luckily saved by his girlfriend Suki. He was so embarsed. Soka was burned by the heated Zuko who he asked to give him so hot co co. "AAAAH! hot coffe burn hot coffee burnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Soka yelled. It was washed by Iroh from the pure ocean warter. 7

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As they got closer Zuko asked Mei how she would feel is she was meeting another girl but he got realy scared to ask. 9

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Fiannly they made it just in time to talk to AAng. "We made it fiannly. Zuko smiled at his mother. Then gave her a hug he was so hapy for his long adventure to find AAng. 11

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  • Wonderful, just wonderful. I would like it if you would discribe what Zuko's mother looked like a little more though. Other than that, you've done a wonderful job!