My superpowered freshmen year

Hi My name is Big D and here is a little story about my superpowered freashmen year. (it wont be the whole year though)1

The night is July 31st 11:30 p.m im out side on my pouch looking at the sky when i saw a shooting star so i decided to make a wish and it was this."If there was a way that would make high shcool more fun like a superpowered shcool that would be great oh i wish." 2

Then I said to myself "yeah right like thats really going to come true." The next day, It is 6:00 A.M and im getting up for school. My dad is taking his shower to get ready for work ,and my mom is puting on her makeup to get ready for work. It is 7:00 A.M 3

Im ready for scool and I am really nervose. My dad hollors "Hey kids lets go your going to be late" my dad,my sister,and I are heading toward the door when my dad says " oh wait I forgot my keys to the car." 4

I told dad that I would get them for him but he said "No thats ok I,ll get them" he takes his hand and he makes it into a fist and a flash appred and then his keys what right in his hand my face was like :0 OMG!!! I asked my dad how did he do that and he said "I did by teleportating them from my night table to my hand."5

I had a surprised face,but then I thought "Maybe my wish came true" now we are driveing on our way to shcool and dad stops the car and tells me "Now big D dont go showing off your powers now I know you got some pretty cool powers but try not to show off ok." I didn't have a clue what he was talking about but I just agreed with him. 6

I whent inside and the pricable was there to talk to all the new students she said "Ok so I know your all new here and I just want to make a couple of rules. Rule 1: no starting superpower fights you start a fight you get put into detetion or if you fight back you get the same punishment, Rule 2: No freezing,lazering,blowing away,or burning people to ashes, any questions, No...Good,you can see what class your in this first cemester in my office. I was confused why did we only have 1 class every cemester,but I decited not to question it. I went to the pricable's office to see what class I was in.7

You should have seen the list for the classes they where big anyway I looked at the list they have put you in your class by what superpower/s you have I saw my name and I looked to see what my superpower/s but my had been whited out and to make things worse I was in sparring class one of my friends Dylan was in there to he came up to me and said hey Big D me and you in class together this should be fun but where in the toughest class there is oh well. 8

I looked at what superpower/s dylan had he had: superstrenth ,flying, and teleportation. Dylan told me "Big D man its going to be fun when we fight with each other." I told him "Yeah it sure is" even though I didn't want to fight him because I dont even know what my superpower/s is. I looked at the list agian and I saw that we had sparring all though the day thats means nonstop fighting.9

I realize that it is about time for class to start so I asked dylan if he would take me to class. He did and now where in sparring class we got a bunch of people in our class there is like 300 people in our class and the room in as big as a stadium,and the ring where you spar in is like a football feild. anyway I got to see alot of awsome superpower fighting there was flying,teleportation,fire and ice balls coming out of people hands10

Then coach Shoemaker ( the sparing teacher) called Dylan and a boy named Tim to fight Shoemaker told them this before they started "Ok guys here are the rules rule 1: if your opponent is down on the ground you leave him alone no superpower fighting till he gets up, rule 2: no killing your opponent if he is no longer to fight the one standing wins, and finally rune 3: if you or your opponent is knocked out of the ring the match is over and if it is a draw sudden death. 11

coach Shoemaker then said "Now begin" but nobody was moving untill Tim started to run after Dylan and out of nowhere a buleish greenish arura started to power around Dylan and his hair turned from solid black to black and blue. Tim said when he saw that "Oh so thats how it going to be is it",and after he said that there was a blue arura powering around Tim and his hair went from solid blond to red and white. 12

Then both of them started to fly and threw punches the sound from there punches made the whole shcool seem like it was in an earthquake it was so cool. There was punches flying everywhere adn everything like that. Then Dylan said " time to end this" and tim said "Bring it on" and both of there hands started to glow and a beam of light came out of both of there hands when the beams colided it made a big exsploshion and both Dylan and Tim where knocked out and out of the ring so coach Shoemaker said "Both fighters are unable to continue it is a draw now lets get these two to the nurse.13

RRRRRRIIIIINNNNGGGG!!! That was the lunch bell and coach said "Ok go and eat lunch everyone but when we come back where starting with you", and just my luck he was talking to me and he also told me that I'll be fighting aginst two oppnents and there the best in the class because they are JR's that just dosnt seem fair does it oh well I guess you have to find out what happends in part 2 sorry its a surpise 14

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  • Nomnom
    August 22, 2008

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    well you explained everything so boring.sry to say it kinda really didnt keep my interest...not to be mean at all.


  • BlackSwan
    July 24, 2008

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    This is a cute story, I enjoyed reading this very much. However, go over and check spelling and grammar since there seems to be quite a few errors here and there.


  • KalineReine
    July 24, 2008

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    Hmmm, I liked it. It was pretty good, actually. It kind of reminds me of like a cross between Harry Potter, and X-men or something... I noticed a few typos and grammar mistakes, but other than that it has an okay plot.