A hundred Chances - Prologue

I imagine a time when I am no longer crying, when prejudice and cruelty have been once thought of and never done again, when we have learned from our mistakes and accidents1

I imagine a place where there are no intentions of harm, when everyday a feeling of superiority, a feeling that I am at ease, at peace. Where everything is under control, where I am happy and grateful with everything that I am, and everything that I will be.2

I imagine a person who knows nothing but how to cope, which is basically everything already. Who can live without the selfish needs, for previous errors have taught them well, as I wish they will teach me as well. 3

I imagine a time when I am free. When I longer have to put up with mother's nags, though I know I will miss them. When I no longer have to witness the horrors of what my newness brings. When I may reunite with those who could not make it. 4

I imagine a time, when I am dead.

Author notes

No, the character is not "emo,"
Uhm, you'll get it as I progress. ;3

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  • marksonwalls
    July 24, 2008
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    well said

    I think maybe the shortness of what you have written has made it all the more powerful.