Chapter Three “Blood lust…”

I just wanted to add- because my comment is at the bottom, and isn't read till afterwords- that I would like to warn you before you read the chapter. I don't think there is allot of 'bad stuff', but if you don't like vampires, blood, or anything of that sort I don't think you should read this. 1

This MEMO isn't just counting for this chapter, is counts for all my chapters, including the first two. Thanks.2

Rebecca 3

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Sorry it isn't as long as the others, but I'm posting the next chapter after I post this.5

(Beginning)6

Suddenly she was hungry for something she couldn't quite place, as her eyes started to turn red. A light thumping sound pounded in her mind, as she searched for where it came from.7

The door to the room was knocked on, and then a young girl was pushed into the room, her golden locks drenched and stained with sweat and blood, her skin bruised, and her cheeks sunken from not eating.8

Sara’s eyes darted from the girls pulse then back to Micheal. 9

“Don’t know what to do?” He said with a chuckle, and then walked over to the girl, and ripped her to her feet holding her hair.10

He picked her up, like a useless doll, and tossed the girl at Sara, landing in her lap.11

She looked down at the little girl trembling in her lap, and pushed away the hair that was in her face, and wiped away the tears that were rolling down her face. Slowly so that the girl didn’t notice she pushed away the hair from her neck, reveling the blood that thumped through her veins.12

Sara had to shake her head a few times to ease the thumping of the blood from her mind, as she held up the girl and gave her a small hug, not noticing her canines starting to grow sharper and bigger by the second. She released the girl, but the thumping grew louder, and she plunged her fangs into the girl’s neck, letting out a little moan of pleasure, as she let the warm liquid roll down her tongue.  13

Micheal walked over to his dresser, took off his towel, knowing Sara wouldn’t notice, and put on a pair of pants. After he was done, he seen that Sara had drained all the crimson liquid from the girl’s body, had thrown it on the floor, and sat smiling at the blood on her hands.14

“I see I didn’t have to tell you when to stop, and that I can call your mother up.”15

She said nothing at first, just nodded, and then a moment later said, “What is happening to me? What am I?”16

He smiled and shook his head as he walked over to her, and leaned over from behind her, and answered “what you just experienced some people call ‘blood lust’. And you are a Vampire.” He let out a little chuckle as he finished.17

Author notes

Thank you for commenting on my last two chapters and sorry I haven't replied or anything yet. My computer is getting on my nerves, and takes ten minutes to do anything... Someone pointed out on one of my last ones that I had a grammar problem.. I'm sorry about that. Copy and pasting it from my website changes it a bit, and when I put it on here I just skim through it and don't catch it all. Thank you for reading though.
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  • Absence of Grace
    February 19, 2005
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    another great chapter...i love vampire stories...about the grammar problem..no big deal...just thought id tell you if you wanted to change it...but anyways, another great chapter, hope you post the next one soon...toodles


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