Fires of hatred are igniting nations
Angry words just spread more hate
Let's work towards our liberation
before we go too far and its too late. 1
Children are raised in fear
Only knowing hatred and war
Hating to see parents tear
They deserve a future once more2
Past time to end silence
and give the people a voice.
Only way to stop the violence
is to for them to have a choice.
A contest entry
- Dark and Insightful by kierancluchey.
175 points, ended August 5, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really like this! It's rhyming scheme is spot on. It's imagery and meaning is great, not hard to figure out, not too 'easy'. A bit short, but at least it isn't so long that there is a noticeable point where your ideas run thin. Awesome, I look forward to reading more from you. Keep Writing, Thanks for Entering,
-Kieran
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