Dont belong.

You can be lost. In all different ways, I was lost. Lost in the big world. No where to turn, no one to seek. No one was there for me, why? I will never fully understand. But all I do know is that I dont belong here. Dont belong on Earth. 1

It was cold, bleak and raining hard. But I had no choice, I had to find her, the girl who would take me away to where I belong. It was a completely different planet. Apparently I was destined to be princess, but I know I wouldnt fit in. I was to go to this 'Tower' and she would open a black whole that would take me to my home land. But I had to find the tower first. It was said to be in a T shape. Bright and yellow, so bold you could see it from miles afar. And her friends would greet me, I wasnt so sure about meeting new people. How would they react? The note the girl had sent me confirmed that they werent that bad, and they wouldnt harm a fly. But after all I've been through I think I have a rite to worry. I didnt know what I was to wear on the planet so I just threw on a short black skirt and a plain black top. I wore kitten heels, but bought my trainers just incase. My hair was naturual blonde, but sometimes it would turn black. It was this special power I processed. Whenever I became angry I began to glow a black light around me, my eyes would turn black and so would my hair. I knew I was special. Because I had many powers, I would have visions and I could sense bad vibes, I could create anything out of this black magic that I could make appear. It could take form of a Crow, to a hand. I could move things around with my mind, and my hands could glow black that caused me to throw beams and other things. I had always lived with my parents. They owned a massive mansion and gave me whatever I wanted. I was spoilt, but I was still never happy. I think my parents were quite happy when I left. I had caused so many earthquakes with my anger, and storms. It had cost them tons of money to repair the damages. I know they were happy, I could feel their excitement. Well. Im happy to be going too. Finally I'll be by myself. Independent. 2

I trudged on through the mud. My feet were soaking, and my legs freezing. I felt like a chicken in the freezer, how far now? I'd been walking for ages. It had only been three hours, but it came across me as centuries. I shook my head and ran to the nearest bench. I sat down and glanced at my surroundings. As my eyes studied the tall buildings, they spotted a yellow blurr. I jumped to my feet. I could see it, at long last I was near the tower. There was no way I was going to move anywhere in these clothes. I was killing myself painfully, very painfully. I blinked, what could I do? Well, afew doors away was a gothic clothes shop. Maybe I could pick up something there. I still had around ten grand left, my parents had shooed me off and bribed me to leave early with extra pocket money, I inched over. Yes. It was open, I pushed open the door and gasped. All these clothes looked stunning. I picked out black quatre lengths, and a plain black top. I kept my heels on, I might aswell. I picked up my bags and made my way out of the shop, I started to walk towards the Tower. As I came closer I noticed something, it was in the middle of the ocean. I shook my head once more. I could fly, but whenever I flew my clothes changed. I murmered some words then jumped up into the sky. I suddenly transformed into some kind of angel, with a white leotard and white skirt, and my heels turned white. I flew and landed on the top of the tower, it looked like some kind of helicopter pad. But no helicopter.3

"AAH! INTRUDER!" I heard a scream of terror, I spun around and stepped back. Infront of me I could see a green boy with pointy ears, and a outer-space-alien looking suit. I didnt know what to do, was I to fly back home and forget this ever happened? I started to tremble, suddenly a black whole appeared on the floor near the green boy. A person in a blue cloak rised from the ground, its face was shaded, of the effect of the hood that hung over their head. I couldnt make out whether it were girl or boy. I stared, they stared back.4

"HELLO? RAVEN? DO SOMETHING! INTRUDER! CYBORG, STAR-FIRE, ROBIN. SOMEONE!" The green boy shouted as he franticly waved his arms infront of the persons face. 5

"She's no intruder." The person replied, its voice sounded husky, but soft. It pulled away its hood and stepped forward towards me. I could see now it was female. "You must be Faith. Im sorry the green idiot scared you, he's just being himself." 6

I shivered, unsure of what to do. How did she know my name, where was I, was I in the right place and what am I supposed to do? "How do you know my name?" I asked, as still as a statue.7

"You're the princess of Azarath." She replied, bowing her head. 8

"Azarath. Wow, that sounds..."9

"Yes. I know." She answered. "My names Raven. Behind me is Beast Boy, you will have to stay here for afew days. Do you know how to use your powers? You should have powers, you do right?"10

I slowly nodded. Raven stepped foward again, in the moonlight I could see she had dark purple hair, and wore a red diamond shaped stone in the middle of her eyebrows. Underneath her cloak was a black leotard, with a circular purple and gold belt that stretched diagonally across her hips.11

"Do you want to come inside? We can talk more." Raven outstretched her hand, I slowly lifted mine up,12

"Sure." I said, still unsure. She took my hand and formed a black whole beneath us, as we disappeared beneath it, I could here the green dude, I mean Beast Boy screech.13

"AW MAN, WHY DO I NEVER UNDERSTAND!" 14

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  • glitter
    February 20, 2005
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    btw lovin the sailor moon pic! On thurs meh will bring meh sm box set 2 round eh?
    Glitter X
    P.s - and meh mum has bought loadsa choc too

  • glitter
    February 20, 2005
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    Keeeewl story!! Yesh meh thinks the dialogue is okay, maybe you should get up earli monday and watch the one at 7am to check that all is well And meh tried meditating and meh head went all funneh and meh passed out lolz. And meh had to miss Drama! Stupid meditation! Does that alwayz happen?
    Glitter X


  • Granny Goose silver member
    February 19, 2005
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    Well, the show teen titans are unfamiliar to me but you did a super job with this story It's intrigueing and well written. I can see you spent a lot of thought on this.
    I'll be reading more of your work. You're quite good, you know and have a wonderful talent for writing

    Granny Goose

  • My Girl
    February 19, 2005
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    that was pretty good. I really like the show teen titans. Great job. I also really liked the picture. with love torie


  • Robbwindow
    February 19, 2005
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    yes

    Good flow of words building up to stromy weather thanks.

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