Sam Fisher stood still, crouched in the shadows, stuck in the middle of an abandoned warehouse. Or so it seemed. At least a dozen guards were searching the factory, all preparations. Sam's breath almost came to a complete halt as a guard trounced by his hiding spot, the guard merely passed him, Sam smirked to himself and grabbed the poor unsuspecting man around the neck and dragged him back into the shadows and swiftly and quietly broke his neck. He said to himself, "You can't attack what you can't see." He pulled out a flash bang from his osprey belt and yanked off the trigger. He tossed it toward the middle of the group of men now gathered together. The grenades blinding light caused the men to scream in pain as their eye's were blinded for a good 2 minutes. At least. Sam decided to have some fun as he proceeded to knock out every other guard, his fun was ruined wen Lambert came on. "SAM! YOU NEED TO GET OUT OF THERE NOW!" Sam sighed and followed his orders as he found the vent through which he came in, and left the building, unseen, unheard, unknown.1
Sam walked down the building of the third Echelon. The Third Echelon is a group of highly trained spies, used to infiltrate, interrogate, and impersonate. Though not everyone was like Sam Fisher. Some were techs for the Echelon. Then there was Lambert. Lambert was a black man with a crew cut in his 50's. Lambert had a cruel sense of humor twards sam sometimes. (BLEH CANT TYPE RIGHT NOW SCREW IT FOR LATER o.o)2
Author notes
Well I'm obssesed with splinter cell so here is the start to my story will add as I go ^^ (note, Echelon -Eh-sheh-lon)
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Nice. I had to highlight the font, but on a screen where I need to scrolll down I do that anyway to help me keep track fo wehre I am... NICE START!
I got Splinter Cell and the Mission Pack for Christmas... I might get a guide, though... DAMN FIRST LEVEL! -
Good start, needs editing
"Sam's breath almost came to a complete halt as a guard trounced by his hiding spot, the guard merely passed him, Sam smirked to himself and grabbed the poor unsuspecting man around the neck and dragged him back into the shadows and swiftly and quietly broke his neck." <--- run on sentence. The background makes it kind of hard to read in my opinion. I had to highlight your story to read it. You have a couple more grammatical (grenades should be grenade's, and eye's should be eyes), but it looks like a good start. -
Awesome....I really love this background too! Very creative!
Peace~~~~Shannon Rose -
sorry bout the kinda hard to read colours n.n;;;
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