when they meet again!!!

sasuke uchiha was walking through the woods trying to get the picture out of his head,the picture of the girl that once showed love for him. 'why the hell an i falling in love with her, she cheated on me with my own brother.

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  • XxSkyTheRainbowxX
    December 20, 2008

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    ................wow?
    he slept with a girl that cheated
    on him.......that is krazy!!!!!
    lol but i like it^^
    love,sky♥

  • OrangePerson42
    September 15, 2008

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    Pretty good for a sentence story! It really makes you think, What's he talking about, or, What will happen next!


  • XxSkyTheRainbowxX
    July 27, 2008
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    umm itz good
    luv, sky xoxo


  • KalineReine
    July 27, 2008
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    Wow! All I can say is... wow! I have never read a one-sentence fanfiction story before! And it was a run-on sentence, at that! XD Nicely done... Uhm, I think? I don't really know, I am just as confused as you seem to be. Lol. I like the pairing though. Does something else happen? Hmmmm? I want to know!!!


  • Tiger-Lily
    July 21, 2008
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    Erm...assuming incomplete? xD

    -HT


  • JESSYstarzSMILZ
    July 19, 2008
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    haha its ok

    wow

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