(Verse 1)1
Oh I'm fallin', 2
fallin' in the dark,3
no one to catch me when I fall apart,4
no one notices and nobody cares,5
I could vanish and no one would be there...6
(Chorus)7
They wouldn't see me even if I screamed,8
no one would notice, my agony,9
I'm an apparation, to their eyes,10
a ghost, a phantom,11
a mist over their eyes...12
(Verse 2)13
I try to speak to my friends,14
they never hear it,15
I try to get my love to see me,16
but all he sees is blurred by his tears,17
My family never feel me,18
they take comfort in each other....19
(Bridge)
No one to touch, no way to feel,20
lonely, hidden behind the veil,21
starved of life,22
hidden by closed eyes...23
(chorus)24
They can't see me even if I screamed,25
no one would notice, my agony,26
I'm an apparation, to their eyes,27
a ghost, a phantom,28
a mist over their eyes...29
(Verse 3)
I listen to the words of those I love,30
hear the tears falling,31
as they fall apart,32
A final goodbye, a meeting of worlds...33
ghostly cold fingers touch warmth...34
in farewell...
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If anne rice wrote music, I think this is what she would've ended up with!
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Sad Day!
Yeah total LP! Bec no matter what you write (happy or sad) its always good and I freakin love it. Your works speak right to me.
Elli -
omg i lyk diz song u made up it kewlness
lolz
luv,sky xoxo
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Aaah! This sounds like it would be something Linkin Park would sing! I LOVE IT!
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WHat a wonderful song! I love it so much! "I could vanish and no one would be there..." I feel this way too, and I really loved this line. You did such a fantastic job on this! :1up: I wish someone would make this song. It makes me wonder what singer and/or band you had in mind when writing this...
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didn't really have anyone in mind I like writing songs and singing them and I had a great tune to go with it but I can't remember it now!! dam,n it!
thanks for the comment
Hunter -
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I know, I do the same thing but they always just end up as poems... It's odd... I love this though.
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Great try. Really haunting. Thanks.
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