*scene 3 continued*1
Sitting behind the wheel of his Jaguar, Cabana man thinks, waiting for the call that lo0opy is leaving the Cafe. He wonders why it is that there have been sightings of four Wenches in his city in the last 2 days. Catressa must be up to something, and why was Touch of Wonder there, what evil plan did Catressa have in mind with regards to Kimberly...ah Kimberly, that's a thought he pushed away in a hurry..you painful, breaking his reverie, he opens his door and gets out to stretch, just in case he has to run, not likely but he stretches a little anyway.He reaches in and hits the trunk release toggle and walks to the back of his car. Reaching into the trunk he pulls out an old weathered football. wrapping his hands around it, he flexes his fingers and pulls it back in a quarterback motion as if to toss a long bomb, On the back swing his radio squelched, startling him from his thoughts, and he loses his grip on the ball. "shit" he spits as he recovers his fumble and rushes to the front of the car.2
Carl is out of the car quickly." She's paying her tab now boss, units 3 and 4 are in position, unit 5 has disabled her car and unit six is still inside...Here she comes!!.3
turning to his left he watches as Loopy exits the cafe, squinting she raises her head to face the sun and smiles. As she turns to walk to her car, the sound of a powerful engine and the squeal of tires can be heard coming down the street towards them. Cabana man turns his attention to the sound briefly and watches as the 60's model cherry red convertible corvette speeds through the intersection and slams on its brakes near Loopy, sensing trouble he jumps the low hedge, followed by Carl and heads in her direction. "Everybody move..NOW!!" he barks into the radio,as he said this he hears a woman's voice "LOOOPY GET IN!!! turning to the sound his eyes meet that of the driver, a young woman of maybe 19, shoulder length red/brown hair that gleams in the sunlight. His eyes are drawn to her lips, pouty and full and then her eyes...and he stops cold...those eyes held a familiarity to them, a knowing, as if they knew one another, which was not the case, if this Was a Wench, she was a very new recruit.4
As loopy reached the car he steps onto the road in front of oncoming traffic, unaware , he is mesmerized by those eyes, they seem to look right into him with a knowledge only closeness brings. Lo0opy slams the door and the vette screams off in a hurry, with the driver casting a glance over her shoulder at him..and grinning ear to ear.5
"HEY you stupid bald crackhead, are you gonna move or do I have to get out and move you". this snapped his trance, looking the guy in the eye and saying nothing, he steps back onto the curb as Carl returns to report.6
"Well boss, I don't know what to tell ya, they seem to be coming out of the woodwork faster than we can track 'em. this one is a complete unknown, but I have men collecting surveillance tapes from nearby businesses that will co-operate, I'll just flash my old badge if need be , to get them to co-operate....boss....boss...hey G are you OK? shit hey G..earth to G..snap out of it man."7
Lost in his thoughts he tries to find the link between the pouty lipped beauty behind the wheel of Loopys rescue car and his past, he knew it was there but could not find it.8
Sudden pain in his left shoulder jars him from his thoughts.9
"Damn Carl, that was harder than needed" rubbing his shoulder as they walk back to his car he turned to Carl and stopped walking, a look of tortured enlightenment on his face" You know who she reminds me of Don't you Carl".10
Looking at his boss with a softness in his eyes, Carl throws his arm over Cabana mans shoulder and gets him walking again."Yeah buddy, I know who you are talking about, lets not jump to conclusions until we see the tapes and run some image diagnostics, then we can discuss this, lets get back to the office, Sarah is already on the case with our low quality images from unit 6's camera in side the cafe.11
Arriving back at the car after dispersing his men, Cabana Man slides now into the back seat, again lost in his thoughts ,a look of disbelief on his face. Carl, without hesitation climbed int the drivers seat and took them back to his office, Glancing now and then in the rear view mirror seeing his boss looking almost catatonic. This was going to be a very long night, and not just business wise. he knew his friend would call him tonight and he knew what they would talk about..what he didn't know was how he would tell his boss all that he knew, without him thinking he had betrayed him.12
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I feel a little intrusive here but Im really enjoying this story. Cant wait for the next scene.
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Excuse me one second sweetie but there is no way in hell that you are putting our queen in a Ford Pinto, thank you!! We are classy lasses, so sleek and sexy or rough rugged and ready to rumble it has to be. Ford Pinto indeed!! Have you lost your mind??? Don't make me put a hurt on you baby!
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how did you get pass security and its wench detector? I can see more than the 3 of you drunk and hollering it up,lol i think Catressa will drive a 1977 ford pinto country squire station wagon with wood panelling on the side, that sexy enough for you?
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No I loved the details in the last.. The Robes, candles and all.. shew nailed me.. Dying to know what kinda car I drive, though make sure I am not on the road when Smoochie drives (gulps, we got her double insured) Just make mine sleak .. I gotta look classy and I have a feeling Kimberly is classy too though I can picture her and I Rough Riding with Rosa in a jeep lol hollaring and drunk ha ha.. Damn we should write our own story guys.. You got my brain going.. And who does torture Carl ? Waiting with baited breath you writer you, Lots of Lusty Love and Evil Grins , Catressa
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LMAO. I have a feeling I know who the kid in the car is from the looks of all these messages. The plot thickens and the ladies are coming out in force. So what do you say boss, do I get to play with one? LMAO. Don't tell Wonder I said that. LOL
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Deeper and deeper we sink into this mystery. I knew you'd have this up sooner or later. Very nice by the way. So when will one of the Evil Wenches have some solid horse power between her legs? I'm waiting!
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Solong as you keep your word of getting mine detailed and back to smelling all nice and girly like me then we shouldn't have any problems...and this includes replacing the ROSE scented air fresher, the make up bag (that says Princess on it by the way), and replacing my Country magazine
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dont even dare think of driving it, it has secret buttons that could cause you great harm
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Awww, how nice of you
Its greatly appreciated. 
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no no no you win!! i will get the car detailed and have it rady for you in the morning, please dont hurt my baby!!!
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All fair in the battles of the cars baby!!
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hey you keep your hands off my baby!!
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ROTFLMAO...Keep the car...Way too much in damage repairs. I'll just take your jag
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catch me if you can Evil Wench ,hahahahahahaha..i agree barbie needs to get lost somewhere. i like country music......and he said someday i hope you get the chance..to live like your dyin..
the air freshener stay, besides that puny little rose one wouldnt come close to covering the smell of the beer i spilled and the cigar i dropped which smouldered for nearly an hour, nor will it get rid of the smell of the hobo sleeping in the back seat, sorry , couldnt figure how to close the top -
OMG I guess you just signed sealed and delievered your death certificate...Barbie needs to die cause she is FAKE. Are you making a crack at my choice of music??? And I said ROSE not PINE....Big Big difference there!!!
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okay i will get you a copy of country bumpkin and i will buy a pine tree air freshener, and then i will go to toys are us and get a replacement for your Barbi-night on the town- makeup kit
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Now you listen here mister, I don't like Vogue... I like the Country magazine, you best get your a$$ back there and pick up that make-up and you better replace my nice smelling rose air freshener or I am going to get my Uncle Carl and he will break your legs at the kneecaps!!!
Edited on Feb 18, 6:42 p.m. because ''. -
whats all this girlie stuff doing in this car? tosses small makeup bag, flower air freshener and a copy of vogue out of the car as he speeds along
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Oh h*ll no...you best be standing 25 feet away from my car if your going to smoke that disgusting thing!!
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umm..now where did i put my cigars...oh there they are
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Boy if you know what is good for your health you will remove yourself immediately from my car and you better not leave a stinky sweaty guy smell in my nice girly smelling car
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you know..the engine on this convertible corvette is so loud, i cant even hear when someone yells at me, i think i will take it for a test drive......vroom vrooom..shreeeeeeeeech!!!!
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HANDS ON HER HIPS I SAID THAT I AM SORRY FOR MAKING FUN OF YOU. YOUR ABSOLUTELY RIGHT YOUR THE FEARLESS ALMIGHTY CABANA MAN THERE EVER WAS/IS
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Sorry I cant hear you....
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No No No No No No...I sowwy I sowwy I am really really really sorry
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ooH! that hurts, low blow..thats it no car driving for you, your taking the bus
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I thought you were the Almighty..fearless Cabana Man?? What is my poor ol' lil mommy going to do to you that youcan't handle if your the Cabana Man?? LOL
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you want me to override your mother? are you nuts? I want to live to finish this series.....PSST!! when she's not looking I will let you drive it like a mad woman,lol
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Now just wait one minute here, do I not get a say in this?? You and mom carry on as if I have no voice in this matter!! What is up with that??
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Thank you kindly! I do appreciate that.
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she only gets the close ups, we will use a ...umm...body double for the...um..actions sequences,lol
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Mom what is really funny is he put me behind the wheel of a very very nice care with no licenses or insurance. I guess he really want to have a work out being my guardian angel...what do you think?
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You put that girl behind the wheel of a car??? We really need to talk!! First off... it has to have roll bars, she MUST wear a helmet, all passengers have to sign a waiver for insurance purposes, the car should have rubber bumpers installed all the way around and uhhh, oh yeah! I hope you own a tire company because she's going to be burning rubber every chance she gets! What can I say? She's her momma's child! This is great terry.
♥ Kimberly
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maybe i wil wreck the car in the next scene
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LOL...OMG OMG I love it This is really good Terry. Your doing a wonderful job on this series. I am loving it. And I love my car hehehe ♥Smoochie
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sorry this one is a little shorter
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