I'll Always Be Right Here Chapter One

I'll Always Be Right Here
By NoMoreTears341

RolePlay Story About Riku Falling Inlove With A Girl Named Natsumi.
The Story Takes Place After Kingdom Hearts 2.
*The Story Begins*2

So Riku, Sora And Kairi Were Finally Together Again. Sora and Kairi Were Finally Going Out, But Riku Was Still Alone.
He Had Convinced Himself He Didnt Need A Love Life, Just Friends.3

*Authors POV*
One Day When They Were All Hangin' Out On The Beach, When Sora Saw A Girl Floating In The Water.
"Riku!!! Look!!!" He Yelled.
"Should We Go Help Her?" Kairi Asked.
"No Kairi, We're Just Gonna Let Her Lay There And Possibly Die" Riku Said Sarcastically, And Dove Into The Water To Retrieve Her.4

*Natsumi's POV*
I Was Being Carried, As Far As I Knew.
His Arms Were Strong, Warm.
I Opened My Eyes To See Who The Person Who Rescued Me Was.
He Was A Really, Really Cute Guy With Long, Silver Hair.5

"She's Awake!" He Yelled To His Friends, Who Ran Over.
"Wow She's Cute!" The Younger Looking Boy With Brown Hair Said.
A Young Woman With Pink Hair Slapped Him, So I Guessed It Was His Girlfriend.
"Heyy, Are You Okay?" The Man That Rescued Me Said.
"Uh, Yeah, I Think" I Said Looking At All Three Of Them.
He Layed Me On The Sand, and He and His Friends Sat Next To Me.
I Just Kind Of Layed There For A Little Bit, In The Silence Before My Rescuer Said,
"So Whats Your Name?"
"Natsumi, Well, You Can Call Me Tsumi, If You'd Like" I Answered.
"Sure, Sure, Tsumi. Kool Name. I'm Riku"
"I'm Sora" The Brown Haired Boy Said,
"And I'm Kairi" The Girl Said.
"Oh, Kool" I Said And Smilied
"Um..Well...How Did I Get Here?" I Asked.
"Well, We Really Dont Know." Riku Said.
"Oh..." I Replied,
"We Just Kinda...Saw You Floating There" Sora Said.
I Giggled And Said "Oh, What An Interesting Story. Haha. Where Should I Stay?"
"Um...Well" Riku Looked Down. "You Can Stay At My Place" He Offered, Blushing.
"Oh, Um.." I Started To Blush "Okay"6

*Riku's POV*
Sora and Kairi Grabbed My Arms And Pulled Me Back.
"You.Totally.Like.Her!" They Both Yelled Quietly Enough So Tsumi Couldnt Hear Them.
"Uh..I Do Not!" I Said Blushing Crazily.
"Uh..Yeah, You Do Riku Give It Up!" Sora Yelled.
"Uhhhh Sora!!!" I Yelled.
No One Had Noticed But Tsumi Was Standing Right Beside Riku.
"Fine, I Like Her, I Like Her Alot." I Said Looking Down,7

*Tsumi's POV*
"Aww I Like You To Riku!" I Said.
"Ah! Tsumi!" They All Yelled.
I Just Smilied At Riku.
"You..You Do?" He Asked.
"Yepp ^-^" I Said.
"And You Said You'd Never Find Love, Riku!" Kairi Said.
"Awww. Come On Lets Go Hang Out, 'Night Kairi,Sora." I Said.
"Night!" They Both Yelled Back.8

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  • Storms
    August 8, 2008
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    ...

    They just met and Riku isn't one to blush... Sorry, had to add that...

    beginning: 2, language: 1, plot: 2, ending: 2, dialog: 2, characters: 1.

  • Storms
    August 8, 2008

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    ...

    Hey, Nikki! It's Zoey... It's alright, but you have a few grammar issues...He said, I said, Riku said... Yeah... But it's alright! =^,^=

    beginning: 2, language: 1, plot: 2, ending: 2, dialog: 2, characters: 1.


  • Poisonous Love
    August 6, 2008
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    pretty good


  • NoMoreTears34
    July 19, 2008
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    Thank You.

    thank you Dez. well i will br writing more chapters soon.


  • Paralyzer13
    July 19, 2008

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    Great

    That was good but it seemed like the story went to fast but other than that you described really well in the story.

    beginning: 4, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 4, characters: 3.

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