Short Story: Fear VS Love

If love is an emotion, what is fear? For its an emotion of love, right? 1

The fear of getting hurt is great, but never give up on love. 2

Fear is the essence of love, the soul; you cant love if you cant fear.3

True love cant survive with out fear.4

"I love you, please forgive me!" Tara exclaimed, trying to get het beloved to listen.5

"How could you betray me? How could you do this to me? I loved you." Ricky countered as her walked out the door.6

The police got an anomous call about missing persons. When they went to check it out, they didn't fit anything unusual until they got to the master bedroom. That's where they found her body drenched in blood.7

Dear lover,8

I love you more than you will ever know. You may not know why I did what I did, but I love you. Most of all, I love the way you don’t back down. Now lets see what you can do, baby. You know I wouldn’t do this if it wasn’t important, right? I love you and know that what I’m doing, I’m doing for love. When I first saw you, I knew I had to have you. When he came, I knew every thing would change. He loved me, but I swear you were my only. You will always be my only. When he touched me it felt like I was dieing just a little but more inside. When you caught us, I wanted it over. I never meant to hurt you, but he said that if I didn't, he would hurt you and I could not live that, I love you. I wanted you to be safe. I will always love you, with all of my heart till the day you die.9

Love Your Baby Girl, 10

Tara11

When the two policemen were done, they were crying. They could feel the love radiating from the note. When the note had been reread they decide to go check out her boyfriend. 12

When the police arrived, Ricky was sitting in a ricking chair on the porch. They wore a look that told him it was serious and not something he wanted to hear. He lead them inside of his house and into the living room. Once they were properly seated, one of the officers handed him the note.13

When he finished reading the letter, he realized he had been crying. He now knew the reason for her awful betrayal. The day he found her laying with that guy, he had wanted nothing else then to have killed him. He didn't, thinking that it was who she chose to be with. Later that night, he went to his room to think long and hard. He had known that they Tara and him broke up, he could still live with the fact, she was happy. He took all of her pictures and put the around him, finally he took the note and held it to him heart. Grabbing a knife, he slit his wrists ever so softly just enough to draw blood. On the wall he wrote "I'm sorry, please forgive me." 14

Then, he set beck down and pulled the trigger.

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  • Tiger-Lily
    July 21, 2008

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    Line 6, "her" should be "he".

    Ow...Romeo and Juliet modern day retelling...man that is depressing. O.O

    This is a great story, and I liked this a lot. the end was a bit abrupt. He should've picked the gun up or something, ya know?

    -HT


  • GPsSnowFox
    July 17, 2008

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    wow...this gives me chills..i love it...very good write..a few mistakes though...great work

    -Snow


  • Luis-senpai
    July 17, 2008

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    its very good, and for me... its truth, love cant survive without fear, and also it need trust... but somehow both words could mean the same.. o well.. great story keep up the great work