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Jenni ferli veda lonei nahu tbyth esea. Sheha dnoon etotal ktos osh ewa sver ysad. Eve ryda ysh ewis hedfo rso meo newh owou ldke ephe rcom pany. Oned aywh ensh ewa souto ntheb eachs hewi she dsoh ardth atth esurf aceo fthew aterb rokean dout cam eago odlo okin gb oy. Hewa sver ywe tash eha dbe enint heseaal lth eti me. Hesa idth athi snam eisRic harda ndth ath eisth ese apr ince. Hesa idth athe hea rdJenni ferwi shin gfo rso meo netot alkt osoh eca metogi vehe rco mpa ny. Jenni ferwa sver yplea sed. Prin cewo uldco meu pont hebe achev eryd ayan dth eywou ldtal ktil lmidn ight. Oneda yth epr ince ask edhe rifsh ewou ldli ketob ehi swi fe. Jennif erag reedan dawed dingwa spl an ned. Afte rth eirmar ria geJenn iferbe gantoli vewi thth epr incein hiss eaho usebu tsh eha dt oke epon we arin gth ediv ingsu itan dflap persan dha dtoke epth eoxy gencyl inderwi thh eral ways. An dsh eha dtog oupt oth esurf aceof tenan dtak eabr eat ho fair. Shew asahu manbu therhus bandwa safi sh. Soth eirch ild renwe rebo than dbeca meth efir stme rpe op lee ver.

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  • bakermiddle
    August 24, 2008

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    "Jennifer lived alone in a hut by the sea. She had no one to talk to so she was very sad. Every day she wished forsomeone who would keep her company. One day when she was out on the beach she wished so hard that the surf ace ofthe water broke and out came a good looking boy. He was very wet as he had been in the sea all the time. He said that his name is Richard and that he is the sea prince. He said that he heard Jennifer wishing for some one to talk to so he came to give her company. Jennifer was very pleased. Prince would come upon the beach every day and they would talk till midnight. One day the prince asked her if she would like to be his wife. Jennifer agreed and a wedding was planned. After their marriage Jennifer began to live with the prince in his seahouse but she had to keep on wearing the diving suit and flappers and had to keep the oxygen cylinder with her always. And she had to go up to the surface often and take a breath of air. She was a human but her husband was a fish. So their children were both and became the first merpeople ever."

    This was pretty cute. It was pretty easy to figure out though.


  • loyda
    July 17, 2008

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    hahaha

    i cheated and read the comment below me with the answers.
    i did manage to get to the part where the prince gets out of the sea though.

    this is very original! cheers!


  • Gary Alexander silver member
    July 17, 2008
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    Aha!

    V eryc ute! It'sal itt ledif ferentth an wh at Idi d...bu tstil lver ycute!
    G
    A


  • BruisedConfessions
    July 17, 2008

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    Jennifer lived alone in a hut by the sea. She had no one to talk to so she was very sad. Every day she wished for some one who would keep her company. One day when she was out on the beach she wished so hard that the surface of the water broke and out came a good looking boy. He was very wet as he had been in the sea all the time. He said that his name is Richard and that he is the sea prince. He said that he heard Jennifer wishing for some one to talk to so he came to give her comapny. Jennifer was very pleased. Prince would come upon the beach every day and they would talk till midnight. One day the prince asked her if she would like to be his wife. Jennifer agreed and a wedding was planned. After their marriage Jennifer began to live with the prince in his seahouse but she had to keep on wearing the diving suit and flappers and had to keep the oxygen cylinder with her always. And she had to go upt oth e surface of tenan dtak eabr eat ho fair. She was a human but her husband was a fish. So their child renwe rebo than dbeca meth efir stme rpe op lee ver.

    Here you go i have this figured out.. it was really really confusing!!!
    good work anyway!

    i'll have to complete the last lines later

  • starwisher
    July 17, 2008
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    Unreadable

    It's in another language!

    beginning: 1, language: 1, plot: 1, ending: 1, dialog: 1, characters: 1.


    • zoralielda
      July 17, 2008
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      No, it's not!

      It's in English.
      Really.
      Try to figure it out.

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