"Aw, come one babe", he moaned, "I didn't mean it, you know that, babe!"1
He gazed at her, forcing himself to look guilty and sorry.2
"My little pretty bunny?"3
I did a sudden movement that caused the vase beside me to decend violently. Peter didn't seem to notice, yet his girlfriend turned toward my direction.4
"You just have to know how much I'm not your babe", she grumbled. furiously.5
"Aw come one, you know you are", he whined, affectionately carressing her cheek.6
"I hate you!"7
With those final words, she marched out of the house with no hesitation. Peter followed her rapidly, trying to catch her before she left. I stayed in, staring at them. 8
Sooner or later, I thought.9
"BABE!" Peter shrieked, "Don't go! I didn't mean to! I CAN EXPLAIN! COME BACK!"10
She swore countless words before driving away. I watched her car, knowing that this was the time for her consequence.11
I moved my hand slightly and sighed, looking carelessly at her car, hearing her saying that she should have finished off.12
I moved my other hand strongly, and started toward Peter, who had ran to his lawn where he sobbed. 13
CRASH! CRASH! CRASH!14
SCREEE!15
Mr. Fluffy was by my heels, rubbing lovingly against me, not making a small movement at each sound.16
Her car had crashed with someone else's, obviously, and I picked up my darling and left the neighborhood at a slow pace.17
And I knew...with every particle...that if he had said the right words she'd stay.18
If he had only said these three simple small words, then they would be laughing over this fight. And I knew. But I didn't say.19
I love you. 20
And that, my friends, was something he didn't say.21
Author notes
I PHAIL :'(
This story sucks, I know. Still...
A contest entry
- Titles and Pictures by Mel-the-Believer.
100 points, ended July 18, 9 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think. ^-^
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Nice but I don't like the way you talked to me!
And also don't pretend you are so happy!
Anyways internet wouldn't make that coment on Mistery Hotel!
And I don't even see that you had that story
Your blambing me for nothing!
Anyways I planned to make it diffrent!
Don't coment things you don't know!
Sorry
I was really upset about what you said to me!
Sorry
telllllllll MEeeeeeeeeeeeee
700 point contest?
Oh, sorry
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Dude you flooded my compute with that comment
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This was nice, short and sweet. Nicely written. I'm starting to notice a pattern on this title, with the guy not saying "I love you". It's interesting how many people's minds work. Anyways, this was good and it did not suck. Thank you for entering. Good luck. God Bless!



