Within Love and Sanity

You are the being who keeps me sane1

Just who you are relieves my pain2

What you did was break my chain3

Take me from where there’s only rain4

And give me back what once was slain5

Why you saved me, might you explain?6

Why was it your love that I did attain?

Author notes

This idea was for the contest, but also an outlet of current emotions... the title I'd actually like to make into some kinda story.. How was the poem?

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  • InsertClicheSNHere
    August 11

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    La très bonne poésie, le boniment rimant agréable, très l'émotion s'est remplie. Bon travail.


  • scriptor
    July 17

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    i liked it, but i dont really have anything to add to that mainly cuz im half asleep at the moment


  • Myra La-Ryn
    July 16
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    Cool.... I like it a lot it's a very fresh but haunting at the same time....


  • lisbet5
    July 16

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    NICE

    I really like it, not all poems have to rhyme but you took the time to do it so i really appriacite it! i like it too and like darkhearted said good flow!

    lis


  • Darkhearted
    July 15
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    good flow

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