End of beauty

Far away from the cities of cruel people,innocent child was living with nature.There was no one to interfare in his life which is full of pleasures,hope and enthusiasm.Beauty and nature were his friends.Besides there was a shady tree with wrinkles on his face share his feelings.He love nature.Nature was his frend.In the moments of grief and darkness, nature consoles him with its everlastng beauty.As ''time and tide wait for no one'' it passes by.Someone from cruel world was told about that place where the child lived.Rapacous people started destroying its beauty.Trees were cutted down,Flowers were crushed.Greenary of that area was gone.So called HUMANS destroyed what was meant for them.Life of pure beauty came to an end.beauty was blured behind the dark clouds.Hope was killed.HUMANS brought end of BEAUTY treacherously.1

Author notes

Well,i dont like to call it a story rather it is an incomplete feelings about those who are busy in destroying nature,its beauty.According to KEATS''A THING OF BEAUTY IS A JOY FOREVER.ITS LOVELINESS NCREASES IT WILL NEVER PASS INTO NOTHINGNESS''.But beauty of nature is 80% diminshed by us.Then how could we admire beauty?''A THNG OF BEAUTY IS A JOY FOREVER...'' is half murdered.

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  • MsAlee
    September 23, 2008
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    Wow, such a strong statement so wonderfully done.


  • June 7, 2006
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    practice can only give you the best


  • April 16, 2006
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    gr8

    AMAZING


  • April 14, 2006
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    its a nice story with nice thought.


  • April 12, 2006
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    Story is good although its your first one but you have written in a good style.


  • April 12, 2006
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    cute

    story is bit interesting i guess!its nice, good ,sweet.keep on writing.


  • April 12, 2006
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    nice write!


  • April 12, 2006
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    gooood

    i like dis story not a bad one!


  • February 3, 2006

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    not bad but u r rite no one can call it a story rather incomplete feelings,idea is appealling!do write more stories to enhance ur writing abilities.......


  • January 18, 2006

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    nice

    writing style is impressive but it couldnt be call as a good story bcz there is no proper idea and not so good vocb. is used though your poemz are very good and specially spurious vanity and unseen death.U have done nice wrk but nowadayz i havent seen any stuff from ur side

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