Relentless Shadows - Chapter 1

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Sorry to disappoint you. Relentless Shadows has been temporarily removed by tallblondie. She has divorced herself from the project and removed what I'd posted without my permission. I guess I won't take legal action.1

However, I do feel it is a good story with a good overall plot. I will be rewriting, reposting, and continuing the story as I have time. There will be significant changes to the original idea, but I think you'll enjoy it when I begin posting.2

Andy

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  • Reaver Greeters member
    August 1, 2008

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    New Favorite~

    Ok, my new favorite by you. I really really really liked this I loved walkers cold-heartedness and the detail and environment were perfect.! Is there more yet? I want to read it.

    Really, i think this out-did Victor


    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      August 1, 2008
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      Thanks Durain

      Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading, commenting, and all the applause. I appreciate it. So you feel Victor is out done by Walker? Victor will be terribly disappointed.

      May you have many good entries and much fun.

      Andy


  • MysticalRayne
    July 17, 2008

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    Beautifully done ~ you two work really well together you wouldn't even know it was a collaboration ~ excellent

    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      July 17, 2008
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      Thanks

      I'm glad you like this story. It is an interesting collaboration. Thanks for reading, commenting, and all the applause. I appreciate it.

      Andy