sitting alone
no one with you
no one at all
forgotten
forgetting
stay awake all night
to sleep all day
alone again.1
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In those few lines, you said so much.
T'was very powerful, and leaves a lot of room for people to relate or fill in their own blanks.
WONDERFUL!
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powerful
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Nice. Its sad, but I like it. I think it's good!
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sad but good keep up the good work
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Nice poem! Really good. looking forward to read more of your stories and poems. *Smile*
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