Click. The beginning of a journey was forever framed in history when mom took that picture. Me, standing next to the open driver’s side door of my blue Subaru forester, and Nadia, standing next to the passenger’s door. That day, it was simply the last bit of summer vacation, the seven minute ride to the beginning of a new school year. It would become a series of rides to and from school, physical therapy, dance class, language lessons and more. The laughter, stories, complaints, fights (yes, there would be a few), gossiping and even the silence we would share day after day would change us, and our relationship forever.1
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Click. The beginning of a journey was forever framed in history when mom took that picture. Me, standing next to the open driver’s side door of my blue Subaru forester, and Nadia, standing next to the passenger’s door. That day, it was simply the last bit of summer vacation, the seven minute ride to the beginning of a new school year. It would become a series of rides to and from school, physical therapy, dance class, language lessons and more. The laughter, stories, complaints, fights (yes, there would be a few), gossiping and even the silence we would share day after day would change us, and our relationship forever.4
The freedom of a license and car came a few months before that day, so the radio presets were, of course, already done. Since it was my car, I had number 1, set to 97.1, my favorite. Nadia had number 2, like my friends would, she choose 102.7. Her music tastes are more like my friends then mine, though mine would soon change. I was all too excited to have the privledge of driver's music choice, but never took advantage of it. My lack of attention to music eliminated any needed for Nadia to miss her own music. Day after day, we got where we were going before I even noticed a music change. Eventually I got tired of saying, "What?! You changed the music? Argh, I didn't even notice," and she got tired of laughing in response. Months later, 97.1 is rarely heard from the speakers in my car, even if I'm riding solo. 5
With the third /Sisterhood of the Travelling Pants/, we turned down the music and put conversations on hold. Nadia read and recapped-she was always able to remember books better than me-and I drove. We devoured the book, looking for excuses to drive and sitting in the car after arriving at our destination. 6
...more to come.7
Author notes
this is a work in progress, but suggestions are still appreciated!
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Comments
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this is cool sash. i luv the bit about the music, its so true. typo in last line, you want heard instead of her. its really good tho, i like the picture concept
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thanks! i'm working on writing more "snap shots" so it would be sort of a collection.
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This is a cool poem. i like it the snap shot writting is a new and fresh concept. Two thumbs up for that alone. Thank you for commenting on Desire.
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wow, i love reading others' interpretations. actually, the picture was on the first day of school, the first time i could drive to school and the beginning of some real "bonding" between my sister and i during many car rides to and from various places.
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Keep up the great writing-gold star!
i'm a bit confused as to what this will lead to, but you mention speech lessons and physical therapy, and it takes place by a car, so...an accident? I love a peice of writing that makes me think-great job! -
haha wouldn't it be great
i may just take the suggestion on a collection tho. hmmmm.
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awesome
Sasha, you should start a collection of these, like loosely storyish, publish them, get famous, and then never have to do anything again and eat chocolate
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