KibaHina Chpt. 2

Kiba's P.O.V1

*yawn* "Morning Akamaru...Akamaru?" 'Where did that crazy dog get to?' Thought Kiba to himself as he walked to the kitchen. "Oh there you are, Akamaru. I was wondering where you were." "Woof!" "Oh thats right I was gonna tell Hinata how I feel today! But first let's eat breakfast. I'm starving!" "Woof!" (Me too!)"There you go buddy! Your favorite." 'Now to fix my food...' Thought Kiba to himself. "Hey wait, I have an idea! I won't eat breakfast and then I'll invite Hinata to eat with me! Yeah! And then when we're done I'll tell her. Come on Akamaru!" "woooff..." "Oh right! your not done with your breakfast yet!" After Akamaru had finished his breakfast he and kiba set out the door to the Hyuga complex. He hesitated knocking on the door for fear that Neji would answer it. Neji never much cared for Kiba because of his pet Akamaru. To his surprise, Hinata answered the door.2

Hinata's P.O.V3

"O-oh Hello K-kiba-kun. W-what brings y-you here?" "I came to ask you to come eat breakfast with me at the Ichiraku ramen shop." "O-oh I would l-love to...b-but I can't...I h-have to train with Neji." "Oh...that's ok...I mean, training is important. Maybe tommorow?" "S-sure." Hinata then closed the door and went to ask her father if she had to train tommorow morning. "Father, d-do I have to t-train tommorow morning...?" "No, Hinata. But if you do as bad at todays training as you did at yesterdays, you will." "I s-see." Hinata then gave a quick bow and went to change into her training outfit. 'When I am finished training, I will go find Kiba!" "You will not win. It isn't your destiny." "I don't care what y-you say N-neji. Y-you can't predict the f-future." Hinata and Neji engage in a fierce fight, and to everyones surprise, Hinata had won the fight by a long shot! " I...I actually did it! I won!" "Well Hinata, since you won the fight, you are free to go." Said Hinata's father with a smile on his face. "Thank you Father!" Hinata then set off to find Kiba.

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  • Elaina15Neko
    July 21, 2008
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    Good conflict! Keep writing please! You're doing a great job!


    • hanataba
      July 28, 2008
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      Thank You!

      I'm glad SOMEBODY likes my story. I was just about to put a notice on here to tell people I was going to stop writing it because no one liked it!


      • Elaina15Neko
        July 29, 2008
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        So are you going to keep writing? I'm sorry but I really like it! If you could I'd really like it! Please? lol


  • hanataba
    July 13, 2008
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    Did u not like it?? I'm sorry if it's that bad Vampiric.....it's my first story...


  • Vampiric
    July 11, 2008
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