How Pandas Landed on Earth

      5000 years ago, in a far away galaxy, there was planet called Pandasabia. Pandasabia is a green little planet that is about the size of Pluto. It looked kind of similar like earth, except the planet is mostly covered with bamboo. On that planet lived a group of species called pandas. They lived peacefully on that planet for more than 10,000 years until a meteor had struck. The meteor has caused a massive explosion which destroyed nearly the entire planet, but luckily some of the pandas have survived the explosion. They were forced to leave their planet, because there were not enough bamboo left for them to eat.      1

      They were traveling across the galaxies in a space ship ( made of bamboo) that travels 4 times faster than the speed of light. They traveled for 2 month until they finally saw Earth. 2

“ Wow! That planet looks great,” Jase called out eagerly, “I bet there is a lot of bamboo down there.” 3

“That would be great!” Everyone nodded in agreement. 4

“Then its settled,” said Black-Foot ( captain of the spaceship), “From this day on, we shall settle on this planet.”    5

      Suddenly the alarm went on, “BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!” 6

“What is going on?” Black-Foot asked. 7

“Our ship went to close to the planet, and now the ship is getting pulled in by the planets gravity” One of the pilots answered 8

“What are going to do? What are we going to do?” one panda started Panicking. 9

Most of the pandas went mad. 10

“ We are dead! We are dead! We are dead!” 11

“I want my mommy!” cried a young panda. 12

“Somebody help us!” 13

“WE ARE DOOMED! DOOMED I TELL YA!” 14

Noises were every where inside spaceship.   15

      “Everyone QUIET!” Black-Foot ordered, “Carter, Chancy, Bonny go get the parachute ready. Everyone else stay calm, we are going abandon ship." 16

“Hiya captain!” answered the pandas as they ran toward to the parachute storage. 17

“Captain! We have 10 minutes left before the ship crashes in to earth.” One of the pilots yelled.   18

      Carter, Chancy, and Bonny came back with the parachutes.     19

“Captian! We don’t have enough parachutes for everyone. We are missing one.” Carter reported in a very worried voice. 20

Black-Foot looked around and thought for a second. “Ill stay!” He finally stood up. 21

“But we need you captain.” Chancy took a step forward 22

Black-Foot looked back for one last time “ I’ve made my mind. Now go before its too late!” 23

Tears start to flow down Chancy’s cheek “ But...” 24

“No more buts. Now leave! This is an order!” Black-Foot looked away. 25

Carter tapped Chancy on the shoulder “ Let go, his made up his mind. Captain is doing this for us.” 26

Chancy looked at his beloved captain for one last time “you are right. Lets go.”   27

      All the pandas jumped out of the spaceship with their parachute on. All them landed safely. From that day they settled on this land, which is now the present day of China. 28

         The End 29

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Thanks for reading this story. The idea popped up when i was think about pandas. It took me some time to write it and edit it. Hope you liked it!

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  • Luci Ferraris
    March 11, 2009
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    This was a funny story... it could be a bad Star Trek episode... no offense. I liked it anyway.


    • StreetRider
      March 11, 2009
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      Thanks for commenting. I dont reall watch Star Trek but i see wat you mean lol.


  • amanda vampiress silver member
    October 21, 2008
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    ROFL! I love how you write such random, weird, imaginative stories, yet make them feel so natural! This idea to write about the pandas coming to earth was pretty far out, but very enjoyable! I laughed through most of it. The end was sad because the captain had to die with the ship, but I still liked the story a lot! Good write! Keep up the great work!


  • Miki Koishikawa
    July 15, 2008
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    This was a great story and it made me LOL!

  • Miki Koishikawa
    July 15, 2008
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    I liked it it was a stage story but i loved it!


  • Disoriented-Elms
    July 15, 2008

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    Heehee

    That's funny. I like the name Black-Foot. Um... but I have to say, isn't "bamboos" suppose to be "bamboo", or did you mean to do that? It's sorta like saying "deer". You can't put a "s" on it or it would sound weird. But then again, I used to think I was supposed to say "gooses" instead of "geese", so that shows how smart I am....
    -Addie
    P.S. Sorry 'bout all the grammar lessons....

  • StreetRider
    July 12, 2008
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    Thanks for reading and pointing out my mistakes.


  • tallblondie gold member
    July 12, 2008

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    Cute concept of where pandas came from. The story is fairly well-written (an occassional error) and is interesting and engaging.

    Keep writing and welcome to Storywrite.

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