Movie trailer #3

*As the scene opens cabana Man is in the shower. The room is large and the shower is surrounded by glass, allowing a view of the whole room. It is rife with the touch of a man. On the wall there are pictures of women in various stages of undress, all seeming to watch him as he goes over his body with the natural sponge. The counter of the long vanity is strewn with a collection of rocks and driftwood in keeping with the earthy feel of the room. they had been collected from all parts of the world since his youth it was his only hobby, one he had kept going since age 5.1

The floor is of earth stone and the walls are rough limber, and a large window looks out onto an alley. the window has no covering and as he steps from the shower, all the neighbors can see him in all his glory*2

As he dries himself off he thinks about his impending meeting with Lo0opy.3

Carl's sources informed him that she was still in the city, though there was no sign of Modern Mistress-she had probably been sent back to her queen to face her wrath and to face the ridicule of her fellow wenches-he would not need to worry about Modern Mistress for a while.4

In his mind he saw the picture of lo0opy-Tina that was her name-Tina. The petite woman who had rescued Modern Mistress was both beautiful and intriguing to him. That she could stay below his radar and come to his town unnoticed gave him reason to pause.The queen, Catressa, was stepping up her attacks with new tactics. There would be no peace offering from her in the near future, which meant he either had to go trolling to get laid or he could corner this pretty wench and have his way with her. That sounded very inviting to him indeed5

As he gets dressed he hums a song under his breath, he is always in good spirits when he is hunting a Wench, the thrill of the chase, the capture, and the thrill of embrace. many fight him at first, others just throw themselves to his will, he wonders how miss Lo0opy will react and is aware that he is getting aroused. Pushing his thoughts away from her for the moment he dresses. Tan casual pants with lots of ball room for comfort, a button up short sleeve Indian cotton shirt of blue and casual shoes that he can run in, just in case she bolts when confronted.6

He leaves his private bath and right outside the door waiting for him is his live in maid/book keeper with his mug of tea, he sips it and squints."one more sugar and  a dash more milk please Sarah" without another word he turns and goes to his study, where He finds Carl sitting at his desk and smoking one of his Cuban Cigars. Rolling his eyes at the man, he sits in the chair opposite him.7

"Morning boss, sleep well?. these cigars are excellent, we cant get these in the states-stupid embargo, I haven't had one of these in ages" he closes his eyes and draws in a large puff and exhales slowly, savoring the taste.8

"Carl!!"  the man nearly falls out of his chair." what new info do you have for me concerning Lo0opy"?9

Looking sheepish Carl stands and goes to the window stares out for a moment and turns to face him.10

"Well G, she is staying at the Hotel Vancouver, room 1306, we have a key already and I sent someone over to check out her room when she left this morning-nothing there totally clean. She has been eating her meals at the courthouse cafe during the day and at night she eats at...um...Number 5 orange, seems she likes to watch the ladies dance, they must know that is your favorite spot boss, I wouldn't go there for a while if I were you, besides all your favorites there are out of rotation and on the road for 2 weeks. She likes to clothes shop and has bought more clothes than she will need for some time. I have men following her and calling me with every move she makes. She is currently at La Senza trying on sexy lingerie, and has been doing so for over an hour. She eats lunch very day at 1 pm so we have a little time before we need to move"11

Just then Sarah returns with his remixed tea, keeping her blue eyes on the floor, anticipating reprisal. He takes the tea from her without speaking and turns from her in dismissal.She turns and leaves without a word, her face hidden by her brown hair.12

Looking at the clock he sees it is 11AM, “okay” he thinks  “time to set the trap‘.13

*Scene 3 A*14

*The large stone Manse  which is the home headquarters of the Evil Wenches stands out amongst the tiny and quaint houses around it. A large stone fence with a double gate bearing the letters E and W surround the property and surveillance cameras can be seen scanning the grounds. Whitby Island on Washington states coast is a mecca for bed and breakfast seekers and for those who like local   crafts, but this house is neither. It harbors the evil mind of the evilest of Wenches,Catressa. The sole founder of the Evil Wenches,she runs her organization from within its walls. And owing to years of being married to a military man, she runs it with military efficiency.*15

*As the scene opens Catressa is seen sitting  behind a large desk staring at Modern Mistress, who sits with her eyes cast to the floor in shame. There are candles burning in all parts of the office.*16

“So tell me, Auntie, just how was it that he got you cuffed to the stall, and don’t give me any Bullshit about being caught off guard, there were two of you”. Look at me when I speak to you, Damn it”!17

Slowly Modern Mistress raise her head to reveal eyes puffy and full of tears, but she doesn’t speak.18

“TELL ME NOW!!” she roars and rises from her chair going to her side, her robe flowing behind her like wings. “I need to know so I can be better prepared next time, we can’t have him having his way with you every time I send you out now can we”? that last query dripped of sarcasm. That got her talking and she spilled the whole evening out in one long sentence and sat staring out the window.19

“Well, a very interesting tale indeed, and why would you send your backup away in the face of danger, did you perhaps not want any witness to your failure, or was it your intention all along to be taken by him?”  Silence. She returned to her desk and pushed a button on her console. Moments later to attendants arrive.20

“take her, clean her up and then lock her in her room to think for a while”. Looking at Modern Mistress she says in a calm voice “ I will come to you later this evening , when you have  had time to think, now go before I change my mind and toss you out on the street”.21

At that Modern Mistress rose and hurried through the open door, followed by the attendants.  Alone now Catressa loosens her silk robe and sits in her chair behind the desk and opens the bottom right drawer removing a framed photograph she keeps there.22

The picture is of a bald man, not exactly handsome but not ugly either. It is the eyes she stares at. Those eyes hold so much in them, his animal magnetism, his hunger his lust for all women, which she hopes will be his eventual downfall. She brushes a finger lightly over his lips which are surrounded by a goatee kept neatly trimmed. “ O Great Bald One indeed, how is it that you always escape my traps, and how is it that most I send after you fall beneath your spell, even if only briefly”? Rage building in her she hurls the picture at the wall, sending shards of glass across the carpet. “I will have you yet Cabana Man even if it means getting you myself".23

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As the clock ticked to 12:30 Cabana man and Carl pull up to the Courthouse in his Jaguar, the champagne color gleaming in the sun. He parks it in a spot marked "lawyers" and turns off the engine, from there he would have a clear view of the cafes only public entrance. He leans over towards Carl and pulls the mans jacket back to reveal one of his treasured Cubans. Trying to look innocent, Carl offers him a light as he unwraps the cigar and bites off the tip.26

“you know Carl, you don’t have to sneak them out of my office, they are yours for the taking, you know that”.27

“ I know G, but it’s more fun to take them when you are not looking”.28

“Carl, I have forty cameras at my place, I am always looking.29

And while we are on the subject, quit hitting on the hired help, it is only causing sexual tension among the women,” he says laughing.30

The radio sounds breaking the light mood. Lo0opy had just parked her rented Mercedes Half a block up and was walking towards the café. 31

“Make sure everyone is in position, I don’t want to lose her, and send someone in after she is seated to check if she is dining with anyone. I don’t want any mistakes”.  Carl gave out his orders over the radio and looked at his boss.32

“You know G, I could go in and try chatting her up a little, I wouldn’t mind at all, it’s the least I can do.” A big smile spreads across his face. “ No I guess not uh.wouldn’t want to find myself in a compromising position”, and he laughs heartily.33

As he watches from his car, Lo0opy walks down the sidewalk towards the café, scanning her surroundings, looking for trouble. She is gorgeous, straight brown hair, not tall but not short, she is thin and her body moves like that of a cat on the prowl, she is wearing a knee length, tight fitting black dress with a dark red trim across the bodice. Which is held up by spaghetti straps, and on her feet a pair of high heels-she wouldn’t be running away this day. As she goes by he gets a view of her ass wrapped so snugly in the dress, and he becomes impatient, and uncomfortable. When she reaches the café door, she takes one last look around her. Her eyes fall on his jaguar, but move along quickly. His heart races and his palms begin to sweat. He must have her he thinks, and he sits back to wait.34

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  • leftoverinterest
    February 25, 2005
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    I just realized who your cast is made up of, like to play with fire do ya? Cant wait to see what happens with LoOopy, I didnt think this wouls be so suspensful, great job.

  • Ogreatbaldone
    February 16, 2005
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    Thank you Catressa, I am glad you are enjoying these. I am hoping to have one more on the books by morning, ive been writing other stuff the last few days, but ive got most of the next scene in my head already so it should be done by morning...thanks for reading...peace Terry

  • Catressa
    February 16, 2005
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    Oh My.. She is right Deena I mean.. I would get the scope without yelling at her, find out the dish on certain things and objects and use that for later use against you... But my temper would flair at her being taken by you.. .You were right on about that.. cracking up .. these are so good.. God I am addicted.. Take Care and be safe, Lots of Evil Grins, Cat

  • Ogreatbaldone
    February 15, 2005
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    cant help myself, sorry.

  • Lo0opy
    February 15, 2005
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    So, you got all your men watching me eh? haha...this is great...you're really building up the suspense nicely...can't wait to see what happens next! Now stop staring at my ass!
    haha

    ~~T~~


  • February 15, 2005
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    I see you are trying to put me to work again. I sure do hope I am earning my pay. A man can't complain being surrounded by such beauty though. Okay boss, you lead and I'll watch your back. LMAO

  • Touchof1der
    February 14, 2005
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    Trust me... I am not shaking one bit!!

  • Ogreatbaldone
    February 14, 2005
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    your time is coming Kimberly, keep laughing,lol

  • Touchof1der
    February 14, 2005
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    This has me cracking up. I almost hate to say this, but the little scene with Catressa and her aunt caused me to picture a bit of a disagreement, if you will, between a Lady and one of her girls up at the Mustang Ranch in Nevada. Of course this was many years ago. But as a result, I have tears in my eyes from all the laughter. I am s-o-o-o sorry my sweet wenches. This is great. I love all the action and creativity flwoing through this. This is my favorite so far...
    ♥ Kimberly


  • Sensual Sapphire
    February 14, 2005
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    I was waiting for you to nail her! Very nice! I was growing impatient to read scene 3. The wait damn near killed me!LOL It's coming along wonderfully. Cat was MAD! The surroundings you find yourself in must make the men jealous! Kick off your shoes LoOpy and run!Fast.

  • Ogreatbaldone
    February 14, 2005
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    Did you say shower,,woohoo,lol, glad you liked it, and thanks for reading...peace

  • Ogreatbaldone
    February 14, 2005
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    Well she was quite angry that you threw yourself at me abd were so willingly chained to the mens room, lol. I know she would never treat you as such, she would just be jealous.glad you enjoyed...peace


  • Always Deena
    February 14, 2005
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    WTF!!!!

    Doubt that I would be tearful of our little encounter....& that Catressa would ever be so mean to her AUNT....she would want to scoop on your abilities(or lack there of)....But the other parts were good....longing for more.
    Deena

  • SerenityNChains
    February 14, 2005
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    Ohhhh my wench has been stolen!!! LOL. She will love the heat in this that lowly lil me could not offer. Bravo on this...now this wench must shower!!

    Blessed be

    ~~Serenity~~
    Billie Jean

  • Midnight Lace
    February 14, 2005
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    This is another great installment. I am loving these. Your doing a wonderful job on them. They keep you in suspense and wanting more. Great job Terry. ♥Smoochie

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