lol my awsome life with the jonas brothers!

Welcome to my life with the Jonas Brothers! Well let's get started from the beginning.1

It all started when I was only five. My mom was good friends with Denise Jonas. I was friends with the boys for so long. I knew Kevin the most because he's five years older than me. Then Joe came along, and he is only three years older than me. 2

Then a month after I was born Nick came along. I didn't know he was older than me, but on my birthday everyone was fussing over me. 3

Then one month later, Nick started getting the attention. I just threw a fit, but still, no one payed attention to me. So I just had to deal with it.4

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A COUPLE OF YEARS LATER6

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I had to go to Joe's school because it was his birthday and the class was going to throw him a surprise party.8

Everyone was there, and when Joe walked in from recess I ran up to him and gave him a big hug. And do I mean big! I mean a big tackle bear hug! He was just like, "What are you doing here?!" 9

Then everyone screamed "HAPPY BIRTHDAY JOE!" He was just stunned, and his mouth made a perfect O.10

A few years after that, I went to a concert with Nick. We went to go see Switchfoot. When we got there we scored front row seats. After the concert we went for the band's autographs and Nick was acting really strange. He was like a kid that got a new toy he wanted his whole life. He was just so amazed!.11

A couple months later, Kevin had to go to the hospital because he was having rapid heart beats. Denise called my mom and asked her to come down to the hospital, so she got me out of school just to go to the hospital. When we got there everybody started crying. I started crying just at the sight of him in the hospital bed. So I crawled on the bed and hugged him while I was crying my eyes out. But remember, I was very young. I was only seven.12

Since I was crying so much I cried myself to sleep next to Kevin.13

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  • Dassy
    September 7, 2008
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    oo good job. it waz very belivable

  • livingstorywriter101
    July 12, 2008
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    This is sooooooooooo sweet!!!! I'd give you more applause but I don't have enough points


  • KaitieTheCheeto
    July 9, 2008

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    If this is going to be included in my contest I think you should've made it longer.
    But it was kind of good. I liked it.
    Good luck.