The Diary--Chapter 2

The family were really freaked out by the paranormal visits, they kept the diary where it was before. Some nights it would be in the kitchen, others back into the attic. But Mandy got to witness it all. Every night she was disturbed by Juliann's visits. But it was only Mandy. "Maybe their trying to tell me something." Thought Mandy. So everyone night she recorded down everything that happened. One night Mandy was really disturbed by what had happened.1

Juliann's father, Frank was abusive to her and her little sister. Anna, she looked like she was about nine. He would verbally and physically abuse Anna and Juliann. When they wouldn't do their chores, Frank would yell at them and smack them. But only when their mother wasn't home. And when their mother would ask about the bruises, Frank made them say they got it at school playing with the kids. So she never knew about it.2

But one night, Mandy cried herself to sleep when she found out why the diary ended so early. When Juliann's and Anna's mother went out on a walk, Frank got so fed up with the girls, he murdered Anna first, while Juliann watched. Screaming in horror just made Frank more excited to kill Juliann. Once Anna was dead, Juliann was already dead inside because she witnessed her young sisters death. Frank didn't exactly kill Juliann first. He smacked her a few times, and threw her in the cellar, she die of starvation. Then Mandy remembered, none of her family had been in the cellar yet. So she ran down there with a flashlight, and there was the rest of the story, she watched every night and Juliann died a little every day. Frank every once in a while gave her water, or something to drink. But it didn't help her starvation. The last night that Mandy got to see her, was the worst, she watched at Frank buried her under the dirt floor of the cellar. Once Frank had found her diary, he read it and threw it in the treasure chest along with all the pictures. You may want to know how their mother never found out, he killed her too. 3

The next morning Mandy ran down into the dusty, smelly cellar. And she could tell even after 200 years, where she was buried, she dug and dug, until she found her remains, and cried as she picked up her bones. She ran upstairs and told her parents EVERYTHING, out of the pureness of their hearts they gave her a proper burial, and until this day, they never encountered Juliann again, but sometimes Mandy wished that she was real.4

--Child abuse is uncalled for, you should never abuse a child, your supposed to tell them you love them even if they make mistakes. I dare you that if you have kids to go to them right now and hug them and tell them that you love them--5

Author notes

I am strongly against child abuse.

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  • RazorBlade34
    February 14, 2005
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    i agree completely... good story