Can't Let Go

What's the use of hanging on,1

Why do we try so hard,2

When all we had seems so far gone,3

You say I love you,4

Like its just words,5

If you only knew how bad thats hurts,6

Maybe then you would see,7

What your doing to me,8

No matter what you put me through,9

I still feel the same as when we met,10

Not that i ever want to,11

But I can't let go of you.12

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  • Electric Sunrise gold member
    July 22, 2008
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    Nicely done, little more i can say about it


  • Rela
    July 18, 2008
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    awesome

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Rela
    July 18, 2008
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    wippy

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

  • werner1221
    July 17, 2008

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    lot of emotion. thats the best thing i can say about this.

    i could feel exactly what you were trying to....um...convey.

    hmm convey thats a good word.

    anyways lol. nice job.


  • GPsSnowFox
    July 9, 2008
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    Love It!! Ive felt like this at some point or another so...Love it!! ^_^

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