red lips1
i could say ruby2
i could say crimson3
i could even venture as far as to say magenta4
but no,5
she has red lips6
simple and eloquent7
pouting like a china doll sitting on a shelf8
never knowing9
what wonders lie beyond the shop window
Author notes
ta da a poem
A contest entry
- An poetry contest for all the poets out there by xoxKokaygirlxox.
190 points, ended July 13, 2008, 15 entries
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Short, descriptive, lovely, interesting , thought provoking. I likeeee it. made me smile.
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This was a very interesting poem simple and eloquent
good job thanks for enterin
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nice, this reminds me of something by the poet William Carlos Williams.
I find the simile to be really fitting for this piece
simple and eloquent all at once
bravo
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ty
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Very nice. I'd vote for some capitalization, but thats just my own little nit pick.
Love the poem, keep on writing!
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