Friends/not good/judgemental/no matter how close/better off with a knife/but not friends/not good/judgemental.....
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yes.
Depressed? Exactly.
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Welcome to StoryWrite
This reads more like a poem than a story so it would be more effective with line breaks rather than slashes separating the thoughts. Of course slashes to fit the "better off with a knife" line
A very clear message that I am sure than most of us can relate to from time to time.
Keep writing and again, welcome to the site.
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