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I love to write romance. I usually go for the really sweet sutff when I write.

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  • Yoko
    July 9, 2008

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    I girl, who has only an aunt, falls in love with a boy. That boy is sweet kind, everything. The girl is sorta crude and she always wonders why he likes her. One day she gets kidnapped and the boy gots to get rid of something that is important to him for the girl. What will he give up? Will he even give something up to save her, or will he just leave her?

    Does that work? If it doesn't please measage me, and ask me for a new one. Good luck!


    • moonwriter
      July 9, 2008
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      Ooooh. If it weren't for the kidnapping part, I wouldn't be stuck. Is there anyway I could get the crude girl and sweet boy part without the kidnapping part? Something a little different please? (I have two characters that fit that description down to a T)
      Sorry about the need for another prompt. My creativty's been so stubborn lately.

      • Yoko
        July 9, 2008
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        Yeah. Well, you can do the story with the crude girl and stuff, but you don't have to make her kidnapped. In the story I need to know how she is crude, and how sweet the boy is. Make another girl, that is a sweet little angel, who is in love with the boy. Who will he dicide to love? The crude girl, or the angel?

        Does that work? I hope so. No need to be sorry. I feel better for people asking me for something new, so they can enjoy the story, than them writing something they don't like, rush it, and all grumpy because they wrote something they hate. I just hope that helps, if it doesn't feel free to message me. Good luck! Hehe, mew!