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My stomach twists as we speak. She is on your arm and even when she is gone her face reflects in your eyes. I continue to be the best friend as I want to run. You have changed more than I could ever think about. Two parts of my soul fight. One wishes to hope that one day we might be possible but the other faces reality. She wont stay forever will she? Maybe one day you will see what is so clearly in my eyes. Why do my thoughts always have to stray to you? I can only hope. Hope for the best. Hope that one day I will move on or you will open your eyes. It feels like an eternaty away. Simple things bring thoughts of you. I wish I could erase the love from your eyes. I wish I could hate her. I wish I could think she doesn't desirve you. I can't. She is everything you have ever wanted. Everything I wish I could be. I don't know what to do. A knife twists in me everytime. I wish I could disapear. I wish I could stop loving you.

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