Trail Of Tears

I have sailed many bodies of water and searched many bodies of landscape, searching for treasure to which every man seeks for. 1

In my journey, this treasure I so much seek for has become my destiny. I walk day and night, I walk five hundred miles and I'll walk five hundred more. But I still do not find what I seek, but soon to come I find nothing ,but heartbreak. My heart has been shredded into pieces, and then burned to ash; and drifted away in the soft whispering wind. My sorrow beckons, as my tears fall in sadness. My grief has become a puddle, to which has overwhelm me, with it's grieving surroundings. 2

My body has gone numb from the pain that's eating me slowly alive, till there's nothing lefted of me accept my puddle of tears. I drowned myself to the bottom of every bottle, to sail away from this pain. But in the waves of my sadness, they sink my boat to the bottom of the ocean. For many thee years I standed on this shoreline, staring at the valley of blue. Searching for alittle glass bottle, swimming in the waves with a message in the bottom, saying that. "I'm not the only one who searches for this treasure. And are destiny's are the same, and that the both of us have found the treasure; we searched year after year for. Which is glory of true love". But as I look I finally see a bottle with a message in the bottom. But as I read this message, my heart goes cold as my face grows numb. As the will to live has been taken away, for thee words say this. 3

"I'm sorry young searcher, but there's no one here for you. You have searched long and hard, to nor any man would dare do. I'm surprised you came all this way, to find something you so dearly want. But I'm sorry to say but I'm already taken. To which my body lays snugged in the warmth of a man's arms. Are lives are short to which can end in a second. There for, there's little time to find true love, and the things we want so much. Were like a pack of dogs, when it comes to love. Were rabit and wild for its taste, but in the shadows lurks a hunter starved for a kill. So I leave you this note, for it would be disrespectful not to". 4

My tears fall with great sadness, and soften this piece of paper I wield in my hand. Which shakes with fear, As I prepare to long in grief to whom, I failed. I'm not only a simple man of my word, I'm also a man to which I'm not to be loved. 5

"I'm heartbroken, but I'm also optimistic. It seems to, that we all live in a small world, and that we all seek for something. Many thee men die, many thee men achieve. But many thee men have weeped in sorrow". 6

I'm now a lonely man to which I walk alone. Crying upon this vast planet till my days gone and over. I now have no one to hold my hand, when I walk through the gates of heaven. Though as I speak, I have been seen as three things in my life of sorrow. 7

I have been decieved as a lonely man, I walked as a lonely man, and now I have died a lonely man. But before I go I have this to say."Thee many years ago I searched for love and found nothing but a savage beast. That ripped my heart out and lefted me to die. "Goodbye may seem like forever, farewell is like the end. But in my heart you will always be, as I walk alone along my great trail of tears".8

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This is my very first short story I ever wrote. So i hope you all like it.

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  • September 14

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    A great representation of misery. "Crying upon this vast planet till my days gone and over." Good job as a first story.
    Poesy


  • fangheart
    July 7

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    Damn....so sad

    "I walk five hundred miles and I'll walk five hundred more" isn't that from a song....LOL
    "And OUR destiny's are the same, and that the both of us have found the treasure; we searched" you kept on using "are" to replace "our", you need to fix that.....in this piece of writing the plot is irrlevant, and so it makes us readers focus more on what is being said....in this piece i understand you're hurt from rejection, especially when you tried so hard to find this special girl....love can be ravage,like a pack of dogs.......when i read this i feel my own pains that make me,hard to open up.....to me women are like a cubix puzzle, and i'm just trying to solve them, and unless they're solved i just don't want to open up to them......to my dismay it's really difficult.....whatever, enough about me.....really good writing!!!!!!!!!!!