Learning to fly

Was it realy time? would I realy learn to fly this day? Nistatix the gryphon who took me in had... apart from expecting me to eat lions without feeling the slightest bit awkward... well for a gryphon she raised me well, and now i would get to fly! she brings me to the ledge and I slowly unfurle my wings... silence... the look on Nistatix's face says it all. Now that she's seen my wings I'm not as welcome anymore. I close them back up and dive off the ledge. there is only a slight look of shock in her eyes.

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  • DeathNoteYaoi
    August 27, 2008

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    well it a great start and i wish i could fly as well lol i wouder if i did fly lol then i could rule the world great story