She's looking at me again. Her perfect eyes gazing deep into mine. Her perfect lips inviting me to kiss them. And yet, once again I look away, rub my sweaty palms on my jeans. Gazing at the bright light of the sun, I can feel her eyes bore into the back of my neck. Feel her skin with her touching me. I'm so scared, I can feel the warmth of the breeze on my cheeks yet I'm shivering, but I can't stop myself from looking at her, nervous as I am I can't bare the thought of leaving without the taste of her on my lips. Turning towards her I see her rushing to wedge her cherry bubble gum into it's wrapper. I've caught her off guard and her naturally tanned cheeks take on the sweetest pink tinge I've ever seen. She smiles at me, and I feel myself melt. Gosh I sound like such a wimp, if my brothers could hear me they'd beat me up for being such a pussy and not groping her. It's weird though, I think I might love her. I know, I know, 'you're 15, you don't understand what love is' etc etc. But just being in her presence I feel an overwhelming rush, like sitting at the front of a roller coaster. An adrenaline inducing mixture of utter fear and sheer exhaustion. God, she keeps looking at me, I should kiss her. Why can't I kiss her? So I take take a deep breath and lean in slowly towards her. Inhaling her smell, shampoo and baby oil. Her breath upon my face. Until our lips meet. No tongues. Just us. Just perfect.
Author notes
I might develop this into a longer story.
To the comp host, I have written this as if I was I guy so it's in line with your rules. This is also the first kiss option.
A contest entry
- Scene: The Kiss by Tiger-Lily.
280 points, ended August 23, 36 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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wow that was really good and very cute! keep up the good work!
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This is cute!! I'm not joking, I love this. It sounds like the perfect fit for my own story, which is exactly the help I needed! xD
-HT
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Aw...that's completely adorable. I love hearing it from a guys point of view. It takes on a different sort of sound than the usual mushy stuff that girls are always thinking. And plus when it is mushy it just makes it all the sweeter that its coming from a boy!
Adorable!
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That's really cute.
I always love reading guy point-of-view, too. Nice job!
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Definitely like. I like the title as well. The two last lines are perfection, in my opinion. I also think your description was very good. It'd be nice if you wrote more for this because what you do have is great. =]
-jj
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Thanks a bunch, I definately intend to wrote more, but for the contest I had to keep it short. Glad you like though! Boo to MCR!
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You're well under the word limit so you have the opportunity to add more detail.
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