It's knocking off all those skin care bottles when you take her on the sink.1
Perfection is smooth skin.2
It's lying awake at night talking about -anything- everything.3
Perfection is a voice in the night.4
It's getting water up the nose because your breathe was taken away right when you jumped into the pool.5
Perfection is wearing a striped bikini.6
It's being so silly your stomach hurts for days after because you laughed that hard.7
Perfection is dancing on the dinner table.8
It's coming to every show, every event, and being invited in return.9
Perfection is on stage.10
It's loving and being loved in return. even when you steal movie quotes.11
Perfection is comfy-cozy watching a movie.12
Perfection is yet to come.
A contest entry
- What Is Perfection? by Frozen Angel.
225 points, ended July 20, 2008, 31 entries
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Comments
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Great ideas in here! luv the "perfection is yet to come"... I really liked it! Nice job!
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wow. that was great. i really thought it was excellent. it was so well thought out. i loved it! good job!
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I love how you described perfection, especially the last line. Although I hate perfection...just a personal thing; I've had a very bad past with it. Read anything on my profile page dealing with depression, and you'll get what I am talking about.
Okay, back on subject. I really loved your comparisons. I know metaphor poems are hard to do. Great job. Thank you for entering my contest.
*Frozen Angel*
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