Blue skies keep falling all around me, 1
And to who's surprise, 2
Do you really know me?3
Ask yourself this question.4
For just one more night,5
I wonder when and why you,6
Never came back to me,7
My heart is fallen down again, black.8
Darkness, and I'll tell you why, 9
I can't see, I can't tell...10
Where is what and what is where,11
Life is only an illusion.12
Do you ever wonder why it was I left you?13
My blue skies are telling me,14
To just leave, leave you all behind,15
I hate myself, and I just know,16
It's all because I hate you.17
You say I am blind,18
But you're the one who never sees,19
The only reason I adore you,20
Is because you hurt me.
Author notes
This was done on the spur of the moment as an entry for a contest. It is a free-style poem, that is why it does not rhyme. (Not all poetry rhymes, I hate it when people think that) I have a few other poems that I've put up here, I hope you enjoy. ^_^ Thanks for reading!
A contest entry
- I dream of Unanswered Questions by stargirl.
250 points, ended July 16, 12 entries
Honorable winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think of this one? And please be honest!
Comments
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Wow, that was amazing. The words flowed so well, I just had to keep going from the very first line. Great job!
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Well, thank you very much! I don't know what inspired me to do this, but... It was really just a spur of the moment type thing. It came to me when I read about the contest, I wrote it just for that. I have strange muses, lol.
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Good luck on the contest! This was very good. I can relate to it.
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Wow, thanks! I am glad you were able to relate to it. I'm not sure if I exactly understand it myself... Not completely.
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Wow that really made me think!
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I'm glad. It was fun to write, and completely random. XD
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