Our Lament

Bite the neck,
Let it bleed,
Havoc and wreck,
We must feed.1

Our life is long,
We've not aged.
Nor do we belong,
In your world of sorrows.2

Your despicable race,
Has no honor,
And one day they will face,
They're all goners.3

You hunt us like game,
We mean you no harm,
To die from you,
Tis ultimate shame.4

We simply take from you,
What you take from cows,
A means of survival,
To insure out revival.5

Yet,
There are few,
That want to kill,
Us for simple thrill.6

If you were truly august,
You would take from us.
What we take from you,
But you are very unjust.7

You think we'll kill you all?
Ha,
Killing you would mean the fall,
Of us all.8

Unlike yourself,
We control our diet,
Savor every self,
And not form riot.9

The riot created,
By extinction.
Which is,
Your distinction.10

Every Night,
The sun dies,
You in our sight,
Our despise.11

Stake us with silver,
We will not die,
Kill us with garlic,
And find you shy.12

We'll be here,
Until the end of time,
So why try,
To keep your foul endeavor,
Forever.13

Bite the neck,
Ringed with blood,
We'll dine in heck,
Before we lie in mud.

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  • Cecilia Marlana
    July 5, 2008

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    really really good

    I really like this. It was really good. I really understand the thirst in the poem. Really its a thirst for acceptance isn't it? I really think so. Really good. Keep on writing these really good poems! Your a really good poet!


  • xToxicxCupcakesx
    July 5, 2008
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    I like it!


  • No Comment
    July 4, 2008

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    Not bad. Kind of strange with the rhyming scheme but other than that is it perfectly fine!

    Just put a background to set the mood Ok? LOL

    Soul


    • kierancluchey
      July 5, 2008
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      Yeah, kinda felt I just needed to post something, but I've got an idea for a story now. (Not about Vampires)