It was Ahsans’ first day in his university. He had heard a lot about university life and was really looking forward to it. He was partly excited and partly nervous. Along with all the good things he had heard, he also was told about the jokes played by the senior students and he didn’t wasn’t to make a fool of himself so he was very scared.
After sometime a few muscular boys came towards him. It wouldn’t be wrong calling them studs, and asked him to go and propose the girl standing at a little distance under the tree. He got scared because he was alone and new to the place and therefore agreed to do what they said. He approached the girl holding a red rose given by those guys and proposed her. She got angry and slapped him. All the seniors started laughing and hooting. He felt very humiliated but was helpless. He couldn’t face them now. But he still dared to look up and saw the girl smiling at two of the boys who had asked him to propose her. He was very much confused that’s when he started thinking that these guys were really cool. Later that day, they came to Ahsan and told him that it was just a joke and asked him to hang out with them. This was what he had actually been looking for so he agreed and came back home.
Ahsan belonged to a poor family. He borrowed money from his dad to dress up and went out with his new friends. He got so involved in his new friends that he lost all interest in his studies and hanging out with friends became frequent. His parents somehow always managed to fulfill his desires hoping that he will study hard too, but they never knew that Ahsan is getting off the track. Soon Ahsan found that his friends take drugs. And forced Ahsan to join them.
Ahsan could not resist the pressure applied by his friends and took those drugs religiously. Few days later he was addicted to drugs and that little attention that was left in studies also vanished. He forgot all about his future and his responsibilities towards his family. He became too much standard conscious and actually started shouting and arguing with his parents. He was so lost that he didn’t know his finals were about to start. He wasted a lot of time and money in arties and drugs and now it was time for him to give some return to his parents but he was not ready for it. He was not prepared for exams but had to take them. After exams he knew that he wouldn’t pass them so he started taking those drugs again like he didn’t care about his life anymore.
When the result of the exam was announced his parents were shocked and so depressed. They asked him the reason for that but he didn’t tell them anything. After a couple of days he went out with his friends for drugs and all of them were arrested by police. Ahsans' friends were released the next day but he had to stay in jail for a while as none of his friends or their parents helped him. At this time he came to know that all his friendship was fake and all his friends were mean. He came back home and was really ashamed of himself. His dad was discharged form hospital that day. Ahsan knew that he has lost the trust of his parents. He came close to his dad, sat on hi knees and started crying and apologizing. But it was too late now. He knew that now it will take ages to regain his trust. Still his parents forgave but, but things will never be the same like they were before.
He left all his friends. And stopped taking drugs, even though it made him sick for a couple of days. But he managed it because he was determined to make things right. For him regaining the lost trust was the only aim. He started concentrating hard on his studies and got good results. He got his degree and found a good job and dedicated rest of his life and all efforts for his parents’ happiness.
How interesting and creative do you find the story?
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Very interesting
This is definitely something that goes on in real life, but something that I found interesting to read. Good job.

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Suprised there are no comments on this. The story you told in this is very common and true to a lot of people. I myself have spent a year in a small college and drinking and drugs were huge. People would come to class glossed over and have no idea what was going on. Now I'm going to a University and I wonder how much worse it will be there. My only advice for this is to make the paragraphs more clear and easier to read. You had a few errors and typos in this that could be easily fixed.
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thankyou for commenting. i will definitely try writing it in a better way the next time.. see my new poem, maybe you see improvement in that.
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