Mercy

Some people tell me to forget about it, some take pity on me while some lower their heads in shame as if it was them who went through MY pain. Well they never did.1

They say some things are better left unsaid yet if they were me…they would seek more revenge.
But some things never change2

I feel like crying as flashbacks appear, I want tears to roll down from my uncaring face as I close my eyes and remember.3

Remember the pain that is still left in my heart. To feel the burns across my face as the cuts on my wrist slowly fades away.4

I want to torture him as much as he tortured me but he is so far away.5

I could still feel his presence around me as his ghost slowly haunts me, day and night.
I always pick up the same weapon I used on him and swing it around me but hitting air can be rather exhausting.6

I now remember the day. The sun was about to go to sleep as it had turned orange, you could hear the children getting ready to get inside while I was locked up in my own house.7

I saw him that day; he went into the kitchen and picked up his usual, root beer as he slowly sat on the couch. He always reminded me of Homer Simpson… but more sickening and dim-witted.8

I had his favorite baseball bat; it had his name written all over it. Homer Simpson No 2.
I creped up behind him tenderly while I had the bat above his head, the fucking fat slob never realized the shadow below him. I whacked it on his head repeatedly as blood spurted onto my face.9

I remember his last words ‘Mercy’ before he dropped dead like the lazy potato sack he is.10

You never gave me mercy did you … Bro?11

Now I sit here in my little cell as I repeatedly say12

‘I killed my brother’

Author notes

I was timing my self.
Overall it took me 10 minutes Writing on paper AND Typing.
So there shouldnt be any mistakes.. Hopefully

Hope You enjoyed this little dark side of me

This is all fictional.. If it werent I would be in JAIL ..

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-Missi

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  • BruisedConfessions
    July 13

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    Amazing!

    I loved it! No mistakes that i could find
    great work .. kept my interest the whole time and was very original. The description dragged me in. nice work

    -Arooj-


  • fangheart
    July 10
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    LOL, cool i love it......perfect, just perfect...nice


  • moonwriter
    July 10

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    This was amazing. It was absolutely gorgeous and so amazing. How did you write something so incredible in ten minutes? That's astounding! Amazing job on this!


  • KayZee
    July 10

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    That was really captivating! Great descriptions, and the cliffhanger leaves a lot to the imagination.
    I would love if you continued it.


  • bakermiddle
    July 10
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    This is really great for just ten minutes. Nice job.

  • freel
    July 10

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    This was a great story, especially if it were written in 10 minutes. I could find no mistakes and loved the descriptive side to it. I look forward to reading more of your work on SW.


  • sport-gurl-101
    July 2

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    wow you should continue and explain why and how he tortured her. it is super descriptive. Why was she locked up? Did her brother do it? I liked how you showed that they were related instead of saying, "he is my brother" you inferred it and that was kool. I would love to read more


    • Missi
      July 10
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      Thanks for reading, Im glad you enjoyed it =]]

      Missi


  • lutinperi
    July 2
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    whoa, unexpected.

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