The Five W's

Who, what, where, when,1

How and why2

Are questions that I find...that I3

Can ask until my face turns blue4

With nothing more from me, from you.5

Not how, not now, not here, not there,6

Not then, not when I've lost my hair.7

But let me give two answers true8

I wrote this. Why?9

Because of you!10

GA11

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  • rbruce
    July 15

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    Well Gary, you have put into print all the questions we all would like answered. It won't happen, but its nice to see I'm only one of many who are asking.
    Good luck.

    Bob


  • The Great Jiraiya
    July 14
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    coooooooooooooooool


  • Elisabeth Greeters member
    July 11

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    Heck! Gary this is a lovely poem. It does what a good poem should do - flow, rhyme, make sense and provide food for thought.

    Good one, GA. Any more?


  • Rosemary silver member
    July 5
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    So cute

    Your poem had a Dr. Suess feel to it. It could be used as a second grade primer for story writing.


  • Sailor Moon
    July 3

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    I think this poem could be transformed into a song it's so cute and catchy - seriously - and I too find the need to ask these questions. Whether or not I want the answer.
    Good job.


  • SageSyren Greeters member
    July 2

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    The first two lines I felt I was back in journalism classes What a joke that was. I don't have the backbone to ask the hard questions.

    I love the poem. Very cute and had good flow.

    Good luck in the contest.
    Brooke


  • stargirl
    July 2
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    I like this poem Its very good that you were able to keep the flow throughout the whole piece

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