There's no shame in what i will do when the world wakes. For a milinea i have been their demon. The faithful servant of the clergy keeping the masses loyal to their god who may or may not exist. But i can no longer haunt this world, the last of my kin has perished and so i must join them in whatever waits beyond this night. I cannot weave my tale into some honerable surrender to the ages, no this is a suicide through and through. The sun's rising, and i'll never know you, but you'll know i was once real.1
Latinius Libintia
Author notes
Vampires suicide note nothing eloquent
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Too short for me. No emotional build. No real attatchment. I suppose my thought would be that a Vampire who has lived for millennia would have more to say. And, there would be something about his or her life within the note.
milinea/millennia
honerable/honorable
kin/kind
many capitals missing.
Don't know, just didn't hit well with me. Good overall concept though. Thanks
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