Central park, midnight, blood seeping from the fresh wound from my ankle, the phantom pressure of the dogs bite still lingers on my leg. Limpining through the dark ominous bushes of central park the smell of bile and urine reek from the ground itself. The rythmic thud of the dog as it pounces towards me for another bite of my flesh only mad me run faster, towards what, i don't even know. 1
Twigs and leaves litter the parks floor as i russle through to some faint hope of rescue, and my hope rises as a faint street lamp shines through the branches of the forest. I forget my ankle and sprint towards the light, voices of normal people grow as i approach. The dogs violent snarls, and its rythmic pace are sounds of the past, and relief washes over me as i reach out to push back the bushes and see the familiar streets of New York, but i stop suddenly, a strange numbness stretching through my torso. I look down in confusion, to see ivory claws caked in blood and twisted intestine. I open my mouth to scream bloody murder,but instead of air and spittle, blood and bile surge forth leaving a soft froth of throw-up hanging from my lips. I fall to the ground,shacking as my body enters terrifying shock. The creature towers over me, an ominous shadow covering him as he breaths across my neck it's teeth bare and tempted for fresh blood. Its terrifying breath of rotten meat, and wet fur turned what was left of my stomache. Though searing pain passes through my remaining being, i try to crawl away to save what's left of me, regardless of my enevitable death. 2
Knowing i have lost any hope of escaping, the creature drags me playfully back. Bile and shock stop me from screaming for help, and i become hopeless as i am at the mercy of the beast. I finally see what it is, but only for breef moments as the darkness of the forest surrounds me and i give away to death.
Author notes
Imagine walking through a cove of trees and bush enjoying the evening, and witnessing magic as day becomes night. Then, suddenly you hear a growl in the thicket of the enchanting trees.....your first though is "What is it?"
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this is a very dark but excellent read...i like it
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hey i actually finished this time
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I liked it...
I like your wording through out the story. It flows nicely. -
Wow.
*laughs darkly*
Twisted.


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Your username match quite well with this short story you got... Yeahhh...*nod*
I like the description you made in this. But be sure to watch out for grammar. Some are too complex. It's easier to split them up and have it sound like spoken plainly clear.
Again, I still like the themes and the grim intestine spilling out all over the boy's body, yikes!!!

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i was going to make it a girl, but if you think it should be a boy, maybe it should be....
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