Take me by the hand1
Take me to wherever you are going2
To the depths of the ocean3
To the highest peak4
/5
I’ve told you a lot6
But it’s still not enough7
I don’t know what else I can do8
I need to know where we’re going9
/ bridge /10
Cut right through me11
Take a look inside12
Can you tell me what you see13
Tell me what you see14
/ chorus /15
Can’t you see that I16
I’m dying inside17
Slowly but surely18
My breath will soon leave me19
/20
So now we’re where21
I’ve always wanted us to be22
Things aren’t right23
Let me know just how24
/25
We need to fix this26
We’re not okay27
And it’s not a secret28
We’re through29
/ bridge /30
Cut right through me31
Take a look inside32
Can you tell me what you see33
Tell me what you see34
/ chorus /35
Can’t you see that I36
I’m dying inside37
Slowly but surely38
My breath will soon leave me39
*40
I gave you my heart41
And you handed it back42
On a silver platter with the wooden stake43
You drove right through the middle44
~ 2X ~45
Are we okay46
I’m not okay47
Are we okay48
I’ll never be that way49
/50
You promised me the world51
I gave you everything in return52
I can’t believe I trusted53
Your stupid lies54
/ bridge /55
Cut right through me56
Take a look inside57
Can you tell me what you see58
Tell me what you see59
/ chorus /60
Can’t you see that I61
I’m dying inside62
Slowly but surely63
My breath will soon leave me64
*65
I gave you my heart66
And you handed it back 67
On a silver platter with the wooden stake68
You drove right through the middle69
~ 2X ~70
Sew me back up71
Do what you can72
Please do all that you can73
To fix what you broke
A contest entry
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185 points, ended July 17, 2008, 95 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Awesome! Loved it and really hope you, or someone else turns it into an MP3, lol. Great work, you should consider writing more songs! But either way, keep writing,
-Kieran

