"Standing here on top of the world, while lightning races across the sky and it's set afire with every bolt, I can't help but think of how terribly fierce beauty is."
Author notes
Why do you want our gender? i'm worried i will be descriminated against, i'm a guy
i wrote this long sentance because yesterday i climbed a mountain with a really close friend of mine monique, and she's a sweet heart, on the way down it began to rain so we stopped at a little rest area, when the storm stopped we continued our walk down. Heat lightning was going across the sky and the setting sun gave the world a wonderful red tint, and i thought it was amazing how happy i was at that moment
one uber long sentance
A contest entry
- A Little Effort... by Taylor Renee.
225 points, ended July 17, 2008, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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Oh, wow, I'd deem this amazingly true and beautifully done.
-HT
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Hah!
You're a guy!? Oh no! You lose!
Just kidding
I'm just curious, I like to see the difference between entries by girl & entries by girls, and if there is one.
So on. You can't win, of course; you're a guy, but...
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I absolutely love this. Completely & utterly beautiful. The wording was great, & I love how original it is!
Thank you so much for entering my contest, and I wish you the absolute best of luck!
xoxo
-♥-
Tay
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