Perfektion?

What is perfection?
A pureness?
A rose?1

Is it something only an elete few can have?
Is Perfektion something that would make everyone attractive?
Spelling dos not make the world turn,
Grammer don't make peoeple happy.2

When someone has a pimple, or a red face,
it dosn't make them less atractive.
Just because someone isn't in shape,
it dosn't make them less atractive.3

Take it from someone who knows,
perfektion dosn't make a woman.
It's the flaws that makes a woman...

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  • quicksilver moon
    July 11, 2008

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    Nice poem. I agree with you that great spelling, grammar and looks doesnt necessarily make you attractive or perfect. Afterall if humans were perfect they wouldnt be called humans they'd be called gods.


  • kierancluchey
    June 30, 2008

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    1 million clapping thingys

    I love the message, as a poem, I would say it's ok, but as a straight out message, it was awesome. On a forum not too long ago, on another site, I asked a question. Regardless the question, this man comments, and says: "If you want people to read what you have wrote, Grammar and Punctuation are your friend." I really can't describe how pissed off I was. I wasn't asking him about my Grammar. I couldn't find any mistake like that anyway. However what he said, relates to you. The world is cruel. Often people won't read a book, if the cover doesn't attract them. Often people judge others because of their skin, looks, or physical/mental state. And often people can't read something that doesn't make sense, or that is in such a mess, why bother reading it.

    Loved it, if I could, I would give you 1 000 000 yellow clapping things, but for now...
    Keep Writing
    -Kieran