The Runaway Part 2

The car pulled to a stop in front of an old Victorian Style house. Bill left the front seat of the car and grabbed me out of the back. He hand cuffed my hands and pushed me towards the house, while the other man locked the car. He soon followed behind us as we got to the front door. The other man knocked on the door and waited for an answer. “Andrew is that you?” the man replied. “I TOLD YOU NOT TO USE MY NAME, STING!” yelled Andrew. The man opened the door and quickly shuffled us into the house.1

At this point I was blind folded. I had no idea where I was going, but I do remember going down some stairs. We suddenly stopped and I heard a door open. I had my blindfold taken off and then was pushed into a room. The door was shut behind me and locked. I looked around the room to see my new surroundings. There was a window at the very top of the room suggesting that I was under ground or in a basement. There was a hanging light and a mirror at the end of the room and a door at the same end. The walls were stained as though water had been dripping down them for years. It added to the underground theory. There was such a murky smell that just made you feel sick to th stomach, but it wasn't strong that you would die from it, but it felt like i would. I walked towards the door at the other end of the room and turned the knob. It was locked. There was also a double bed and that was it. The bed looked so old and used. I was too afraid to sit on it, as i was unaware what else had been on it. I'll just stick to the floor.2

Suddenly the door I had just tried to open opened and another girl was thrown in. She was beautiful. She had golden blonde hair, sparkling blue eyes, a perfect nose lips and chin, probably a C-cup bust, a perfect stomach and long legs. She looked as shocked up as I did. “How long have you been here?” she asked me. “Only about ten minutes,” I replied. Her face started to go white. It was as if what I had just said was very bad news for her. “That means….. I only have one day to live,” she said in great fear. She started crying and her eyes where really blood shot. I didn’t understand what she was saying. “What do you mean, you only have one day to live?” I questioned. She looked like she was preparing herself for a very long story.3

“See, I am not the first girl to get here. There was a girl before me, Anne, and a lot more before her. What these men do is abduct girls off the street, take them her and rape them. When I arrived Anne said the same thing I just did and the next day she got killed by those…those horrific men. They are monsters and I’m next!” she said crying. Then I started to understand what was happening. I felt sick to the stomach. How could there be people in the world that could do something like that. And I was next. I had to get out of there. But there was no way out. There had to be a way, but how?4

All of a sudden the door opened and Andrew and Bill walked in. “We brought you some food,” Andrew said handing me a tray of food and a glass of water. As he did the girl went to grab the apple. Andrew slapped her and angrily said, “None for that bitch. Penelope has been a very bad girl.” They stormed out of the, slammed the door shut and locked it.5

On the tray was a chicken roll, an apple and a straw for my drink. I ate the chicken roll and gave the apple to Penelope, and then I drank the glass of water. I started to feel sick. The room was spinning and I couldn’t see properly. I heard Penelope yelling, but the only thing I managed to hear her say was: “Oh no, they’ve done it to you as well.” Then I passed out.

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  • EphemeralStyle
    June 30, 2008

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    VEry scary O.o This post wasn't as descriptive as the last one, but it kept the story moving along quickly. I'm interested to know how this person is going to escape... Great work

    Eph