How I feel about writing

When ever I see a good movie or read a great book 1

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i have a passion in my heart that tells me, 3

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I can create something like that, 5

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My heart beats fast i almost cry 7

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i feel lighting running up and down my spine 9

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Winter storms try to break out of my stomach. 11

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I see a certain picture it freezes in my head13

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and won't come out unless i describe it in my storys. 15

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Writing is not just a hobby, it's more then an art, 17

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It's a passion in my heart that calls my name 19

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if only the thoughts inside my head could be written on paper 21

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but the world isn't ready for them yet... 23

I tryed to decribe my feelings as much as possible i am sorry if i faild

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  • MumMum
    July 13
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    OMG you just explained what i feel about writing too.You rock.

    *shows Ninja Kitty* lol

    • Lodkod
      July 13
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      lol

      *pets Ninja Kitty* then runs to play basketball

  • VivaciousLily
    July 9

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    EEek, I like this a lot. *bounces*

    xD Sorry, I totally feel this way, so it was a great read for me. =)

    -IL-


  • Quixotic Greeters member
    June 28

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    You did well with this. Made sense to me in nearly every aspect. Don't really know if it matters or not, but there is alot of grammar stuff doing throughout. But other than that, i have nothing but positive for this. Well done!


  • Tiger-Lily gold member
    June 28
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    Line 213 needs a "try" and me = my.

    Line 1415: surtain = certain

    wont = won't

    storys = stories

    Line 1819 its = it's

    Okay...this is awesome!!! I'm really glad you asked to check this out because it is too true!

    Great poem, just some minor typos.



    -HT

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