It looked like a miniature version of my fave mountain, Rainier, sitting in the turquoise-orange swirled sherbet dish, blue and white granite. I took it gingerly out of the freezer and my fingertips slightly stuck to the dish from extreme cold. 1
Ice crystals coated the mound, which I licked off and crunched as they melted in my mouth. The next lick brought a burst of frozen raspberry and vanilla, quickly melting down my throat, leaving a trail of cold creaminess sensation slowly making it's way to my stomach. A third lick revealed the fudge filling inside! Deep, dark thick pockets of the chocolatey oozing and filling my tongue.2
Yum Yum
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Comments
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instead of "fave" spell it out and put favorite. be professional with a contest writing. I think this piece could have been better, although it did make me want some of it. hehe.
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