The Blackened Sun Dies,
A Wicked and Frozen Set,
Bringing Down the Skies.
In a list
A contest entry
- I SURPRRRY AT YOUR FAB HAIKU. by brittanyshanae.
350 points, ended July 5, 2008, 16 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - I want your best...POEMS!!! by Le Masquerade.
170 points, ended July 29, 116 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - For the Poetic Soul by Asfand.
350 points, ended October 29, 54 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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I love haikus!
Very nice imagery here
Thanks for entering!
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Great haiku! I haven't read many of these yet and it was nice to see this entered into my contest! In those three lines you gave me a whole picture and that is hard to do. Very good work, thanx for entering my contest and good luck!
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i liki the begginning but i think you should add more to it. I think it is getting somewhere by that begging.
Take my advice and make it better.
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It's a Haiku, only 3 lines, with Syllable count 5, 7, 5. Hard to add more, when there's nothing more to add.
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well done
I like this a lot. Well done indeed.
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When I saw the title sunset I thought of something romantic and inviting, but I liked this dark twist.
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wow thats deep i love it. WELL DONE!
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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