Ice Shadow

I am a super hero born from other super heros. I go to a super hero school and sometimes it can be really interesting. I was born with the power to shape shift and to freeze. I know interesting combination. Ice and Shadow, are my parents. My dad is Ice, know by his friends as Benjamin Louis. My mom is Shadow, known by her friends as Shannan Louis. I know that Shadow is a weird name for a shape shifter and I even asked her what her name meant compared to her power. She told me that when she is someone else she is just a shadow of them. She may look like them (like a shadow) but she is a totally different person. Now that I think about it, I guess it is a pretty cool name. Anyway my story starts on the first day of school, Hero High.1

A rush of ice cold air hit Willow's face making her sit up quickly looking around for whatever had hit with air.
"Time to wake up Willow. School starts today." Willow rubbed her eyes and looked at her dad, Benjamin Louis. His blonde hair was slicked back, not a stray hair out of place, and his teeth were almost the color of the ice he made. He wore a dark suit with a blue tie and shiny leather shoes. Willow slowly sat up and groaned.
"I dont see why I have to get up anyway. Hero High doesn't teach you anything except saving people and using your powers right." Benjamin looked at his daughted. She rumbed her eyes to get herself more awake and sat indian style on the bed. He opened his mouth to speak but his wife intervened.
"Honey come get up you'll be late. And I dont feel like asking one of the parents to fly you up there so get ready." Willow signed and crawled out of bed. She looked through her closet on what she should wear. It didn't take that long to decide that she was going to wear some jeans, a t-shirt that said dork. She looked over at her dad.
"What? Did I do something wronge?" Her dad shook his head and smiled.
"No not at all. Its just that you should be happy to go to this school. There will be teens just like you. You can use your powers freely, provided you follow the rules though." Willow threw her clothes on the bed and crossed her arms.
"Listen dad, I know you are trying to make me feel better and everything but I had mom as a parent too. I can be pretty stubborn sometimes. I dont like this school. Everyone is probably snops and stuckup jerks. I will go for you and mom but I wont appreciate it." Her dad nodded gave her a hug and looked at the clock.
"Listen I have to leave for work, see you after school?" Willow nodded.
"yeah see you after school."

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